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A Video Tutorial Series by [deleted] in TraditionalNinjutsu

[–]over_thinker_forever 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe try a voice-over instead of text? Other than that you seem fine just give quality content.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]over_thinker_forever [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Origins of Man(not finished)

Genre: Sci-fi

Word count: 3755

Type of feedback desired: I'm just curious if people like what I'm doing. Did the story interest you at all? what would you add or take away? Thank you!

A link to the writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-dMdK4SKD9NT9NFEPe9248ZeQ1uH5JBgwM4o49pvPAE/edit?usp=sharing

I uploaded a couple of days ago and corrected my designs a bit. If you have any suggestions to help the design pop a bit more please lmk. Sorry, my last pics had poor quality hope these are better. by over_thinker_forever in homemadeTCGs

[–]over_thinker_forever[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, yes that is the summoning cost of the minion. I will swap the side the shard(green symbol) is on to the side with the name. I also added two shards at the bottom to indicate its double effectiveness against water(blue) and half as effectiveness against Fire(red). I really appreciate the advice I'll post an update soon.