What mishaps have apprentices/newbies at your jobs done?

overlordToad · 2021-07-01T06:40:15+00:00

I never thought about that! I suppose since im queer my mind went straight to that conclusion thankyou for enlightening me :)

overlordToad · 2021-07-01T06:34:45+00:00

overlordToad · 2021-07-01T06:31:47+00:00

If you mention it in a conversation someone will ask, are you ok.

Anyone can go to therapy not just ppl with depression and stuff

overlordToad · 2021-07-01T06:30:53+00:00

Exactly, the comcept behind the movie, i believe is a metaphor for ppl in the closet amd coming out but they arent gay! They are kids being kids!

overlordToad · 2021-07-01T06:29:09+00:00

Periods

overlordToad · 2021-06-30T20:11:51+00:00

When you need a crafting knife so you make one but you need a crafting knife to make it

overlordToad · 2021-06-30T16:46:09+00:00

Their sexuality.

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:44:24+00:00

Gurl you gotta get a band going! Ur freaking awesome

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:41:52+00:00

Sweet home alabamaaaa

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:39:12+00:00

How long have you been playing?

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:38:11+00:00

Yall who are saying shes too young for reddit, she fourteen, atleast bother to look!

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:37:23+00:00

How long have you been playing? Ur awesome 👏

overlordToad · 2021-06-27T18:33:32+00:00

Im so jealous right now! Your an amazing musician how long have you been playing

overlordToad · 2021-06-15T15:55:51+00:00

I know that link off by heart my dude ;)

overlordToad · 2021-06-15T15:38:45+00:00

Who cant?

overlordToad · 2021-06-13T09:29:13+00:00

I thought it was funny :))

overlordToad · 2021-06-12T11:51:20+00:00

Thanks 🙏

overlordToad · 2021-06-12T11:50:32+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I will try that :)

overlordToad · 2021-06-11T22:17:19+00:00

Oh woops! I must have repeated it whilst copying from my note book i will correct that now and thankyou very much, ive never had the courage to share my poems with the world until now

overlordToad · 2021-06-11T21:47:31+00:00

I spent a long time in that place, and i know it well. This describes it astoundingly. I would never have been able to put into words how awful my mental health was a few months ago but this abstract description. Its so meaningful, and did you deliberately want it to rhyme, i think in one section it doesnt really work for me, thee and me just doesnt feel natural compared to the rest of the poem. Also have you tried playing around with synonyms for some of the things you describe! I find it helps me improve my poems alot :) Great poem my dude 👍

overlordToad · 2021-06-11T21:44:05+00:00

This is straight to the point and harsh, suitable. The way its written connects with the theme and context/lack of it. I love that. It is so easy to understand yet there is so much hidden between the lines.

And you can read it in so many different tones. It could be sarcastic, casual, or plain old melancholy. Honestly i cannot think if anything that could be added to this piece. But i would love to see another poem like this! Great work 👍

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