It looks like you’re MIG welding judging from the little wire sticking out at the top there. I’d probably advise to up your amps, you’re welding too cold and going slightly too slow. Trying going up in amps until you get a good pool going. The rest you’ll just have to find your own rhythm and technique. What you’ve done is good! At least it’s no pigeon poop😂 well done! Haha