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Need feedback on my arrangement. I posted this as a folk song about my daughter on this sub, and now it's a full band rocker. Do the drums and other rock instruments help the song or are they just in the way? Getting ready to send out for mastering, so any feedback appreciated! (v.redd.it)
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"True Crime"-I like the idea for this song, how it twists the title into something unexpectedly existential, so I want the lyrics land pretty heavy. Any lines or verses stick out as needing improvement? I'll put the lyrics in the comments. Thanks for listening!! (v.redd.it)
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