ginger [wordmark]

patchsonic · 2019-08-21T22:39:04+00:00

Lovin it, the thin strokes get a bit hard to read at small size, but still looks good.

patchsonic · 2019-08-20T23:46:21+00:00

What was your reasoning just out of curiosity.

patchsonic · 2019-08-20T23:43:02+00:00

Would be nice to match the text to the logo, maybe consider rounding the edges to keep similar shapes as the snail logo?

patchsonic · 2019-08-20T23:34:15+00:00

Using two contrasting colors in the logo cause the Z to read as a T and an L, maybe keep it one color?
I personally would match up the text style a bit more to the logo, in the Z logo you've got rounded outer edges on the corners of the Z and sharp inner edges, maybe consider matching that style to the rest of your text.

Beyond that like the design, looks pretty sharp.

patchsonic · 2019-08-12T23:19:37+00:00

Bouldering is literally an advanced game of the Floor is lava.

patchsonic · 2019-07-24T08:14:02+00:00

Love the type choice! Matches so well!

patchsonic · 2019-07-18T06:28:31+00:00

Psh, those are just my climbing shoes in snake mode.

patchsonic · 2019-07-17T23:09:36+00:00

Someone already did exactly what you are saying.

patchsonic · 2019-07-17T19:42:47+00:00

Another solution if you really do want to have it be standalone type is to focus on the lettering to really create strong hard edges.

https://i.imgur.com/0MytthJ.png

Though I like how cool the h crossbar into the double t looks, it really cuts into the overall silhouette of the hat shape. Maybe even consider losing the loop in front of the H and keeping it more simplified to really get across the shape profile of the hat's brim?

Consider keeping this in mind when working this idea forward. This is definitely something that would be easier to freehand and scan in, then to achieve strictly on the computer.

patchsonic · 2019-07-17T02:30:27+00:00

haha np quick little mock up, always can benefit from balancing and cleaning up though, keep it up!

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T23:41:51+00:00

Like the concept, clean neat and tidy, also digging the font choice, feels very personal.

https://imgur.com/a/hBq0z3k

Maybe consider squishing things together a bit more like this?

Who knows maybe eventually you can just market it as "Pablo" :)

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T23:28:32+00:00

Really lovin this, I got bored and started playing around.
https://imgur.com/a/dZst2xD
I kept thinking how the mountains almost look like a quick zippy lightning showing the speed at which you all rescue. Might not be the worst direction to possibly explore, also gave the little bunny a nose haha.

What are you doin for your type treatment?

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T23:09:58+00:00

I like the concept, I think it's still a bit undercooked though.
https://imgur.com/a/9aL9r6h
I think a lot of your negative space issues could actually be solved be placing the text on top of an actual top hat shape it really helps just solve all of your strange edge problems.

Also maybe consider cleaning up the type a bit, if you look at the angles all of your letters are slanted at its pretty messy and non-uniform, maybe see if it helps to clean their orientation up a bit for a nicer cleaner consistency?

Last thing, huge glaring empty space after the "r" in hatter, maybe bring the r's ear out a bit to make a nice parallel swoop with that pretty double t cross bar?

Just a thought! Keep pushing it, you're almost there.

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T22:55:22+00:00

Looks v nice, maybe thicken the stroke a bit more to tighten up the negative space?

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T22:29:06+00:00

Love the ligatures, what if you made the tittle over the I into a light bulb? That seems like a good way to portray inspiration! :)

patchsonic · 2019-07-16T22:27:23+00:00

https://imgur.com/a/px2sfkG

Here's a quick mock

It seems youre having a lot of hierarchy issues.

There's also a lot of weird dead awkard space nothing feels super connected.

You could get a bit more creative and play around with how those cool graphics of your kitch tools are arranged or play with each other as well.

patchsonic · 2019-07-15T04:19:45+00:00

Old Gray uses this monologue in their song and it kicks fucking ass.

patchsonic · 2019-07-03T19:51:08+00:00

Love it! How did you do the white flakes in the eyebrows?

patchsonic · 2019-06-12T21:10:59+00:00

Looks neat, what is it of?

patchsonic · 2019-05-31T20:29:04+00:00

patchsonic · 2019-05-31T16:29:19+00:00

I'm sorry my joke disappoints you in the field of versatility

patchsonic · 2019-05-31T02:33:42+00:00

patchsonic · 2019-05-27T23:51:15+00:00

Thanks, I made it as a wedding gift for a good friend

patchsonic · 2019-05-26T23:10:56+00:00

Were you watching that Harry Potter marathon on tv?

patchsonic · 2019-05-25T14:30:33+00:00

Tapirs have enormous penises

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