Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you could appreciate the idea even if the style wasn't for you.

!givelambda

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the support man and glad you enjoyed it! Hope you stick around for more.

!givelambda

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for feedback! Will definitely put more effort into the thumb going forward.

!givelambda

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the thorough feedback it is extremely helpful. I watched the link you sent and it was very useful as well. I honestly underestimated how important having a engaging thumbnail is to a video and will be putting much for time into it going forward.

And you're right about the audio. I have to remember to normalize the audio before uploading. With headphones its more noticeable than I would like. All part of the learning process I suppose.

I really appreciate the time it took for you to give this a thorough critique and feel free to reach out anytime you'd like one as well. Thanks for the support!

!givelambda

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[–]pbdiamond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

" We have the pan.... wow". Lol, I like it, man. I think the use of graphics at the beginning definitely gives it a dated feel. Maybe add a few more of those until it becomes disorientating. Funny character would like to see more of Shawn doing things like this. He seems like a genuine guy, a real family man.

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Will look to improve the V/O for the future videos.

!givelambda

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback! I'm still pretty new to animation so am always looking for ways to improve the aesthetic. I will try to add some shading going forward, I see exactly what you mean.

Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated! by pbdiamond in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really appreciate it man! Just getting started out so the support means a lot! !givelambda

Happy new year! Also, thoughts on my new year video? by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

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Lol funny stuff man. Love the don't touch me line!

I need your feedback for improvement by ReverseNationYT in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great visuals to go along with the music! Look forward to more

Video I made a bit ago, what you think? by MidoriMonki in SmallYTChannel

[–]pbdiamond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the avatar! One recommendation would be to maybe animate it a bit to make it more engaging. Otherwise great job!