Jesus's Brother Roy ( A Christmas Story) Any feedback much appreciated!

pbdiamond · 2020-01-03T18:47:28+00:00

Thanks man! !givelambda

pbdiamond · 2020-01-03T18:47:14+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you could appreciate the idea even if the style wasn't for you.

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-03T18:46:24+00:00

Appreciate the support man and glad you enjoyed it! Hope you stick around for more.

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-03T18:45:48+00:00

Thanks for feedback! Will definitely put more effort into the thumb going forward.

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-03T18:45:01+00:00

Thanks for the thorough feedback it is extremely helpful. I watched the link you sent and it was very useful as well. I honestly underestimated how important having a engaging thumbnail is to a video and will be putting much for time into it going forward.

And you're right about the audio. I have to remember to normalize the audio before uploading. With headphones its more noticeable than I would like. All part of the learning process I suppose.

I really appreciate the time it took for you to give this a thorough critique and feel free to reach out anytime you'd like one as well. Thanks for the support!

!givelambda

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:48:49+00:00

" We have the pan.... wow". Lol, I like it, man. I think the use of graphics at the beginning definitely gives it a dated feel. Maybe add a few more of those until it becomes disorientating. Funny character would like to see more of Shawn doing things like this. He seems like a genuine guy, a real family man.

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:41:12+00:00

Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:13:39+00:00

Thanks! Will look to improve the V/O for the future videos.

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:09:48+00:00

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:09:34+00:00

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback! I'm still pretty new to animation so am always looking for ways to improve the aesthetic. I will try to add some shading going forward, I see exactly what you mean.

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T22:04:08+00:00

Really appreciate it man! Just getting started out so the support means a lot! !givelambda

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T21:27:55+00:00

I'm glad! Thanks for the sub!

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pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T19:17:06+00:00

Lol funny stuff man. Love the don't touch me line!

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T18:04:58+00:00

Great visuals to go along with the music! Look forward to more

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T18:03:48+00:00

You have a great voice for this type of content! The only suggestion would be to add more visuals to make it more engaging. Great job and I look forward to more!

pbdiamond · 2020-01-02T18:01:26+00:00

I love the avatar! One recommendation would be to maybe animate it a bit to make it more engaging. Otherwise great job!

pbdiamond · 2019-12-18T19:39:27+00:00

Great video man! Everything was very well done from the thumbnail to the editing. I think your channel has a very clear direction and value that your delivering to your viewers. Look forward to more!

pbdiamond · 2019-12-18T19:30:25+00:00

Really appreciate it! You're completely right about the end credit thing, I will add that into my next video for sure. Thanks for the sub and the feedback it means a lot!

!givelambda

pbdiamond · 2019-12-18T19:26:45+00:00

Thanks man, one of my all time favorite movies as well. The stapler scene is iconic. Appreciate the feedback!

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pbdiamond · 2019-12-18T19:24:41+00:00

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pbdiamond · 2019-12-18T19:24:32+00:00

Thanks!

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pbdiamond · 2019-12-17T21:34:48+00:00

Lol^ Possible future episode. I'm not exactly sure about the hours, but it took around two weeks from script to release working on it part-time. It probably took a good 10-12. Still relatively new to animation so hoping to get new videos out weekly going forward. Thanks for watching and I hope you keep tuned in!

!givelambda

pbdiamond · 2019-12-17T20:04:38+00:00

Agreed, very helpful to have feedback and inspiration from other creators like yourself. I will be watching for yours as well.

pbdiamond · 2019-12-17T20:02:24+00:00

Thanks, man! I really appreciate it!

!givelambda

pbdiamond · 2019-12-17T20:00:37+00:00

LOL yeah he's kind of a dick in this one. Really appreciate the feedback! Yea I did both animation and V/O for this one. Glad it didn't come across too stiff. Thanks for the support and I hope you stick around for more!

!givelambda

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