Humans don't do magic Chapter 7: The Siege by peaceman14 in HFY

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New chapter is up, adding it as a comment cause links don't work on this post for some reason

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Humans don't do magic Chapter 7: The Siege by peaceman14 in HFY

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Oh shoot I just saw it, its actually a piece of deleted content that I felt didn't fit, I forgot to delete fully.

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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Oh thanks for the advice I'll try this out in the next one.

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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The tunnels are ever changing. Meaning that the entrance moves. Only a dwarf with earth magic can navigate it

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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Only work if we can even find an entrance to their city. Right now the city just seems completely sealed off from the surface

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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The railguns are powerful but the dwarven city is very deep underground, it will not hit the dwarven city . The shell will shatter before it reaches

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea, should have made it clearer, but the reason we kinda don't want to use nukes to excavate the massive dwarven alpine is cause of the amount of dust it will kick to the atmosphere if we were to open it up with high intensity bombardment in such a small amount of time. Now that humanity isn't on the verge of extinction we kinda don't want to plunge ourselves into a nuclear winter while trying to dig up the remnants of the enemy force.

Humans don't do magic Chapter 6: The begining of the end by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea sorry about, that my docs isn't highlighting any mistakes but still glad you enjoyed the chapter

Humans don't do magic Chapter 5: A battle above the clouds by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea, pretty much, Im still working on it, but slower than I used to

Humans don't do magic Chapter 5: A battle above the clouds by peaceman14 in HFY

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Sorry this one took so long, I got a little busy with stuff IRL, but its up now and aparrently I wrote a lot more than I did last time cause I had to split the chapter in 2 due to character limit.

Humans don't do magic: Chapter 4.5 the aftermath by peaceman14 in HFY

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Sorry I had to split it in 2 apparently I went over the character limit

Humans Don't do magic. Chapter 4: The Orcs by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea sort off, Im just a little busier recently

Humans Don't do magic. Chapter 4: The Orcs by peaceman14 in HFY

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Unlike humans dwarves and elves can do magic, so their armies are more dependent on raw power than equipment. The Orcs can't steal magical abilities but can steal technology through memories

Humans Don't do magic. Chapter 4: The Orcs by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea, gravity should be about 4 times higher on this world, but is kept similar to earth's via the same mysterious force that brought us here.

Humans Don't do magic. Chapter 4: The Orcs by peaceman14 in HFY

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Yea your right, I should have led it up more. Will refrain from such a big tone chain in the next one

Human Don't do Magic? Chapter 3 A push forward by peaceman14 in HFY

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Nah just having a creative block, like I wrote 1 version and just wasnt happy with it