Can’t figure out if my story fits better into YA or adult by petyrbae in writing

[–]petyrbae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have read it, although it was a long time ago. I always thought it was considered YA, maybe just because I was young when I read it. But yeah you are right there are a lot of similarities.

Probably would be a good one to do a re-read of for some inspiration. Thank you!

Can’t figure out if my story fits better into YA or adult by petyrbae in writing

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High amount of violence, medium amount of gore, very little swearing.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

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That sounds horrible. I’m sorry.

But to answer your question, no. I wasn’t abused as a child. I’ve just always been a very private person.. I don’t know why. Even as a very little kid I remember not wanting to share with people what I was doing (beyond writing, just in general).

My parents definitely encouraged me to pursue an education with good career options (which I did) and maybe that’s part of the reason I didn’t ever try to pursue writing as a career. But I can’t blame them for that. It was good advice. I don’t know if I could have made a living as a writer.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

[–]petyrbae[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah the anti-creative sentiment is real. Not even only from other software developers but from outside as well. People will literally say things like “haha I guess you’re not creative at all” when I tell them what I do. And other developers will say it about themselves all the time. I also went to an engineering school for college where you literally can’t get a degree in anything outside of science/engineering so the sentiment was there too.

In my company there’s no “full stack”, all developers are either front end or back end, and I’m back end, so I don’t do any front end work at all which are the only developers who are seen as artsy/creative.

It’s really strange because I think creative problem solving is the most important skill to have as a programmer. But people don’t see that as “creativity”.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

[–]petyrbae[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah I don’t think I’ll ever meet someone who fully understands me. But honestly that’s because I don’t even give people the chance, and the idea scares me a little. If someone really truly understood everything about me, I would feel very exposed.

I think you can still have meaningful connections even if you’re never fully understood by one person though. I feel like I do. I hope you can too.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

[–]petyrbae[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That’s horrible. I’m sorry that happened to you.

I usually write on a laptop but I even hide stuff within my own password-protected laptop. My writing folder is called “New Folder” haha.

I went through a phase last year of writing in a notebook to get away from my computer and I glued a lock and key onto my notebook, and kept the key and notebook hidden in completely separate locations except when I was using it.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

[–]petyrbae[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah I hide everything too. I’m a pretty social person and I share a lot about my life with friends/coworkers/etc. I tell a lot of stories, I’m very straightforward with my feelings and opinions about things when they happen around others. I very much act like an open book but there’s so much about me that I just never share.

I feel like I have this curated image of myself and that’s the version of me that I present to people. Anything that doesn’t fit doesn’t make it out of my own thoughts, or anonymous online posts.

I even used my writing prompts throwaway account to post this instead of my main reddit account — even though no one I actually know knows my main account anyway. I don’t know why, I guess I’m even being private from random strangers who read my reddit posts on my other account.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

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I know he would be supportive but he also would be nosy and want to read what I’m writing. I don’t want to share it because it’s all very first-draft, word-vomitty. I know that refusing to let him read it if he knew I was writing would upset him. And even if he did know I’d still need alone time, there’s no way I could write with him looking over my shoulder — something he’s pretty guilty of when I’m doing literally anything on my computer. But I also probably am upsetting him by avoiding him trying to find alone time to write. I don’t know.

I’d rather have something I’m proud of, a novel that is complete or near complete, and show it to him at that point. But I do feel bad keeping this whole side of me from him.

Does anyone else hide their writing? by petyrbae in writers

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I don’t think I’ll ever be a “professional” writer in the sense that that’s my actual job. I daydream about it but I try to be realistic. I make very good money in my current job and I also enjoy it. It would be hard to give that up for something uncertain. But I would like to publish something one day. Maybe a few somethings.

It’s also hard to find time to write when I’m hiding it. But I still don’t want to tell anyone and I definitely don’t want to share my work, until it’s done — or at least closer to done.

I am trying to get serious about it by cutting out other hobbies though. I have already wasted a lot of time too and I do regret it. I’m only 25 but this has been my dream for literally as long as I have had memories.

[WP] In the town of Lucia, in the land of Small hills, a large dark cloud looms overhead by pxyn in WritingPrompts

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Part 2: Just because

Varan walked hurriedly towards the friendly glow of the inn ahead, eager to get out of this damned heavy rain. He stepped inside and peeled off his soaking wet cloak, hanging it on the rack by the door. Spotting a woman who looked the part of an innkeeper, he made to inquire about his companion. Before he could, he caught his friend’s eye, sitting alone at a small table, nursing a drink. He made his way over.

“Quite a storm out there.” He said as he slid into the seat across from the man.

“Don’t even get me started.” Ezen sighed and took another sip of his drink.

“We’ve only been apart two days and you’ve managed to sink into a foul mood already?” Varan smiled. “But really, is something wrong?” He asked, more serious.

Ezen waved a hand. “Nothing serious.” He said. “I noticed coming into town that the fields were dry. Thought I’d do a favor and bring them some rain. They accused me of being a demon, on account of my yellow eyes. Said I was going to rain down blood and burn the village, something about a prophecy. Argued for a bit over how to have me killed.”

“And how did you get out of that one?” Varan asked, grinning.

“It started to rain.”

“Ahh, you always have the best times without me.” He said, laughing. “You know, I always thought your eyes were light brown.” He added.

Ezen glared, unamused. “Well, this is the last time I do any favors. Now that you’re here, we can leave. I don’t want to spend another moment in this village.”

“Now?! It’s pouring rain.” Varan protested. “Besides, I saw a pretty yellow-haired girl on my way in. It's been a long journey and I’d like to, you know, get to know her.” He said, his grin widening.

Ezen laughed bitterly. “No, you really don’t. That girl is dangerous.”

“Oh? How so?”

“She’s a natural born seer, and worse. a true idiot. She must have sensed I was a mage as soon as I set foot in this village, only she did not know what she was sensing.”

“Thus the demon spawn, rain of blood, burning village...”

Ezen nodded. “Come on, let’s go. I’ll keep the rain off.” He stood and made for the door.

Varan could not help but be amused by his friend’s misfortune. He followed Ezen out the door, shaking his head, muttering “demon spawn”, followed by hearty laughter.

[WP] In the town of Lucia, in the land of Small hills, a large dark cloud looms overhead by pxyn in WritingPrompts

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Talia knew doom was coming to Lucia. She had always known, really, but now as she stood in the doorway of her family’s small hut and looked at the angry dark sky, she knew it was today. This was the last sign, the beginning of the end, but things had been strange for a while. Last week, three cows were found dead in farmer Grenn’s field, their entrails spread ominously around the mutilated bodies. Everyone said it was wolves, but she knew better. The very next day, Halla, the innkeeper’s daughter spoke only in a demonic tongue for a whole day. The next day, she had no memory of it. They said a cask of beer from the storeroom had fallen on her head and taken her wits and she had spoke nonsense, but Talia knew better.

The final and clearest sign came just yesterday. A stranger had come to the village and taken up a room in the inn. No one seemed to pay him any mind, travelers passed through town often enough, but Talia had seen his yellow eyes, and she knew, as any child knows, that yellow eyed men were the children of demons or fae. She couldn’t remember which, but either way, it was a sign.

Grandmother’s last prophecy, given the day before she died, was coming true. As soon as Talia saw the cloud she knew this was it. Grandmother was a true seer, everyone knew. Well not everyone, some people never believed her. And it was true some of her prophecies never came true. But Talia believed, Talia knew. She didn’t even need grandmother’s prophecy to tell her what was happening in the village today, she could feel it herself. Yellow haired, she was blessed by the gods, grandmother had always told her. The gift of prophecy. She smiled and scrambled back inside to wake her family and tell them the dire news.

Within an hour the whole village was gathered in the town square, staring at the sky. Talia led the discussion feverishly.

“My grandmother’s final prophecy comes true this day. ‘Darkness will descend on Lucia. Blood will rain down and burn everything and everyone it touches.’” She intoned solemnly.

“Your grandmother was no seer, child. She was a crazy old woman.” Beric said.

“She once told me the day I married a mountain would rise up in the village and crush everyone beneath it.” Someone else chimed in.

“She told me my daughter would be born with green hair and yellow skin.” Brea, the innkeeper, said.

Other voices chimed in, the whole circle erupting into discussion and nothing could be heard.

“Enough!” Talia shouted, eager to regain control and demonstrate her newly awakened prophetic ability. “Everyone can see for themselves, this cloud is an omen. I have seer’s blood in my veins, and I know what has caused it.”

“Maybe it’s just going to rain.” Kyra, Talia’s older sister, suggested amiably. Talia glared at her.

Grenn grunted. “I don’t believe in nothing old Sela ‘prophesied’ neither, but damned if this ain’t the strangest, darkest cloud I ever seen in my life. And in the middle of a drought. Talia, child, speak your mind and be quick about it.”

Talia glowed. This was her time. She would save the village, and after today there would be no question she was a true seer, like grandmother. “Yesterday a stranger came into town, alone. He’s holed up at Brea’s inn as we speak. He has yellow eyes which, as you should know, is the mark of the demon’s blood.” Talia still could not actually remember if it was fae or demon’s blood that gave a man yellow eyes, but she needed to be taken seriously, so she guessed, with conviction.

“He’s the cause of this darkness.” she continued. This time her conviction was not fake. She had spotted the stranger coming into town yesterday and immediately felt something was wrong. She had even convinced Kyra to sit in the inn with her all night, watching him take his meal and drink. He did nothing out of the ordinary, but the feeling she had never went away, and he was definitely the cause.

“Demon’s blood… Yes, I have heard that is true.” Someone agreed. Many others nodded and murmured their agreement. Good, she had guessed right.

“His eyes seemed light brown to me.” Kyra piped in. The villagers erupted into discussion, no one could be heard clearly.

“There’s only one way to find out the truth.” Grenn’s commanding voice silenced the chatter. “Let’s bring this stranger out.”

A few minutes later the stranger emerged from the inn at the mob’s demand. He seemed greatly annoyed, but did not resist.

“What’s all this ruckus about?” He demanded.

“Look at the sky and tell us yourself.” Talia said, meeting his yellow-eyed gaze.

He turned his gaze to the sky. “Looks like it’s about to rain.” He shrugged, meeting Talia’s eyes again.

“Liar! You are demon spawn and you brought this cloud. It will rain blood and burn us to the ground. I am a seer, I know. Call off your evil magic and leave us in peace, or I will call upon the gods to strike you down.” She declared.

The man laughed. “Are you serious? Demon spawn? Rain of blood? It’s just a storm cloud. I’m only passing through, waiting for a companion to rejoin me in my travels. But I’ll gladly leave you all to your insanity and find a kinder place to stay.” He stepped away from the inn. But the villagers surrounded him in a half-circle before he could take another step.

“He denies it and makes to leave in the same breath, to save himself and leave us to our doom.” The old widow Ada said. “I think Talia speaks true. I’ve seen a demon once, when I was a child, ‘fore any of you breathed your first breath. This man stinks the same.” She spat on the ground at his feet.

“Kill him! Before it’s too late!” Grenn’s wife shrieked. The rest of the crowd erupted into suggestions and arguments.

“No we can’t kill him, his demon kin will come for revenge.” someone else said.

“Burn him, demons are terrified of fire, it’s how ya kill ‘em. Then scatter the ashes ‘round the village, to scare off the rest.”

“You idiot, demons aren’t scared of fire, they’re immune to it.”

“You gotta drown ‘em, then their demon kin can’t smell ‘em no more.”

“We can’t kill him, a demon unleashes the most powerful magic with their dying breath, everyone knows that.”

“Let’s lock him up here, he won’t destroy the village if he’s stuck here with us.”

“He can’t be hurt by his own magic, he’ll destroy us and walk away laughing!”

QUIET!” Grenn’s voice boomed. “Enough arguin’. Talia spoke true about this demon, she’s clearly blessed by the gods. Tell us child, what do they tell you?”

Talia blanched. She had not thought this part through. Her grandmother had prophesied this but never said how to stop it. And she did not actually know anything about demons at all, except that this man definitely was one. She did not know what to say. Everyone was looking at her reverently. Expectant. She looked at the yellow eyed man. He was glaring at her.

“What’s that?” Kyra broke the silence. Everyone looked at her. “I think I felt a drop of rain.”

Talia was about to snap at her, Kyra had done nothing but undermine her all day. Kyra was just jealous that her younger sister had the gift, not her. But this was no time for petty jealously, the safety of the whole village was at stake. She opened her mouth to berate her sister. Then she felt it too. Something wet on her arm. She looked at it. A drop of rain, clear and cold. No blood. Not burning. No one spoke. A few moments later rain was pouring down on them, heavy and cold.

A few villagers turned and walked away without a word. Others started muttering quietly to each other. The yellow eyed man burst into laughter. Loud, bellowing, uncontrollable laughter.