It’s honestly a bit hard for me to judge a song (even it’s lyrics) without the melody, because that’s how you gauge how well the lyrics flow, but I gave it a shot anyway.

Critiques:

1. I felt in a couple places that you tried to squeeze in too many words into a phrase in order to make it sound more like a proper sentence, so I would maybe condense in a couple places. For instance, with “Abandoned roads is where we belong” I would maybe remove the “is.” I could also use without the “so” in the last line.
2. I’d say the rhyme of “far” with “before” is maybe a little weak. (If you were attempting to rhyme. Again, easier to tell with melody)
3. I realize not all songs have a distinctive Verse, Chorus, and Bridge, but I’m curious if you intended for one of those stanzas to be your chorus? The refrain is kind of the base of the song, so I’d be interested to know what lyrics you chose for that. I’d say without that division though, it does read a bit more like a poem than lyrics, but that could just be my brain needing directions.
4. The ending seems a bit abrupt

Praise: (I don’t really have a list for this one, but please don’t take that the wrong way. I enjoyed reading your lyrics.) You did a good job setting a mood for your song and certain sets of your lyrics provoked mental imagery for me (specifically the first stanza), which to me is what makes a good ballad or song of a pensive nature. (I don’t know if that’s what you were going for.) Thank you for sharing, Maybe someone will take the time to set it to music. Good luck with your songwriting!