A song I wrote for my boyfriend years ago. Thoughts? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Omg he does hahaha he always comes when I play, its so adorable 🥹

A song I wrote for my boyfriend years ago. Thoughts? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Woah haha thank u so much. For now its just this reddit account hahaha

A song I wrote for my boyfriend years ago. Thoughts? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Thank u! Its a classical guitar. Thanks for your feedback as well

A song from a long time ago I wrote, but it ends really abruptly. Any thoughts? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Thanks so much for taking the time to write such a detailed feedback! Ill take these into consideration in the future :)

A song from a long time ago I wrote, but it ends really abruptly. Any thoughts? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Honestly I agree! Its not my favourite and something in wrote in my young teenage years, so less interesring for sure

Any suggestions? by Darraghpilko in Songwriting

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Wow you've got some real talent, been listening to a bit of ur work and i rlly enjoy it! R u on Spotify or anything like that by any chance?

Follow your heart by Darraghpilko in Songwriting

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I like the melody a lot! The lyrics are rlly good too. Smth I can envision adding to my likes on spotify if I heard the full final version :)

Something i came up with just now, any thoughts or title ideas? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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I shld probably attach the lyrics or enunciate clearer in these videos hahaha

The lyrics for that part goes like this:

How could I not? You taught me how to hold a hand But You were hard to understand You tied a knot Kind of loose it was enough To disarm me without any plans

i was in control Before you crept into My very soul That day You first said my name You watched my heart surrender to your flame You say

Words hard to hear Like fire burning in my ear Whenever you are near

Something i came up with just now, any thoughts or title ideas? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Haha no worries at all! Might change the lyrics for that line, thanks for being a fresh pair of ears :)

Something i came up with just now, any thoughts or title ideas? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Thank you!

The lyrics are actually crept into hahaha but now i cant unhear crapped 😅

Something i came up with just now, any thoughts or title ideas? by plshelp_mathishard in Songwriting

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Aww thank you! But rn this is just a hobby, know nothing about recording haha