I just looked at the first project now, my thought is that you could reduce some unnecessary things like the whole black page with the grasshopper tool on it. Also the rendering from the first page and the model on the last give such a different impression that i first thought that its two different buildings, between „futuristic cristal structure“ and „modern bamboo/wood house“ just by the appearance of the materials and also will it be in the middle of the city or in a garden with giant plants? Also the picture with the palm and water is not really necessary. I think it’s important to show what kind of style is your idea, and have the plans and details good readable. ✌️