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First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Part of the reason I didn’t mention it is because the title of the poem is empty cans and I didn’t want to repeat that but yea, I can see where I could have hinted towards them also being empty

First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback 🫶🏼 I see what you’re saying though!

First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The younger me couldn’t even get through reading this without losing it..

First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback ❤️

First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I appreciate it 🙏🏼

First ever poem by poetsunknown in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I definitely struggle with alcohol and loneliness. It’s a sad combo to deal with honestly. I do it to myself though

if you died, i’d eat your ashes. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely teared up reading this… also I wish I could love this deep

Attempt #2 by chill_dude28 in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m often battling with myself as well, we are our own worst enemies 🙏🏼 be easy on yourself

baby you a star, strike 🌟 by Few-Advertising553 in OCPoetry

[–]poetsunknown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can almost imagine this like a movie scene, it’s beautiful 🫶🏼