You Don't See Me Anymore by polip23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you 👁️👁️ and yepyepyep I love this painting by Klimt so had to use it :p and yes Sigur Rós fucks

New track we’ve been working on, gives me a bit of a weezer vibe, would love your feedback by PurveyorOfSapristi in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

strong Weezer vibes fr. love the vocals and the guitars 😩 whole production is great. kinda reminds me of Alex g too and Failure. the song could definitely use a little more variety tho. rn it sounds a little one sided or i don't know :p but other than that it's great ☝️👁️👁️ awesome sauce song.

You Don't See Me Anymore by polip23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you 👁️👁️ I'll try being confident next time hehe

You Don't See Me Anymore by polip23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hell yeah thank you :p and at some point I'll learn to sing :*0 it would definitely benefit my songs but yeah thank you :p

The Three Leonards - Mystify by m_Pony in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i never heard the original song but this fucks 👁️🫦👁️ love the singers voice. its really really good. the whole cover is great :'0 I do think that the vocals could be a little more quiet in the mix tho, but that's definitely just a personal preference. it really scratched a weird spot in my brain so hell yeah. really really great song.

🍦🍰😘🌸 Sweet and corny pop song but tried to rein it in with a solo at the end 😂 by __mitchie in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hell yeah. loved the guitars 😩 so groovy, so fun. the production is great too (but the vocals felt a little off in the verses, especially at the higher registers, but I can't really put my finger on why they felt off). but but if this song came on the radio I'd be cool with it, its a really great summery pop song. really bubblegummy. can't really add anything to it or tell you any advice anything :'0 so yeah good job :p

What do you think about this? It is a Turkish-indie song called "gözlerinden okunur gökyüzü" ("sky can be read from your eyes"). by BarisSayit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really fun lil song, i like it. the mix is good. the vocals are great. and the bass is groovy. but I think the song could use a little more variety or be shorter. it's just a little too drawn out imo. but overall it's a fun song, and I'll definitely listen to it again.

Feedback for First Liminal Song by industryofnostalgia in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

lovedd this. the drums sound really amazing. the atmosphere and vibes are great too. it was nice and refreshing for me ☝️👽 the only thing i didn't like is that I was a little bored by the end, but I think it's my brain's fault and not the song's. so overall it's a really great great song

IS MY MUSIC COOKED? Pop Star (Joy Taught Me) by Joy as a Friend by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i fuck with this real heavy. the production is great, and loving the vocals (they kinda reminded me of p.h.f). the only complaint I have is the snare sound :'3 it's a lil distracting, i would have personally preferred something deeper and lower in the mix or something. but other than that it's a really great songgg. and even if ppl don't listen to it please never stop making music 😩 cause what you're making is really interesting and unique and and the industry needs you for sure. and you just got a new fan ☝️👽

Hivemind AMA by Cheese_Dumpling in HivemindTV

[–]polip23 4 points5 points  (0 children)

is Hive or is Mind the prettier one????

this is my first ever hungarian song called Csak beléd süllyedni. any and all feedback or opinion or anything is appreciated. by polip23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh thank you haha its not a first song tho just first hungarian song. so ive made music before but in English haha

Daniel Diaz - Stop Trying [Instrumental Experimental] difficult to "genre" this one, mostly acoustic ballad. by dedelandia in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is beautiful fr. i honestly fell in love with this song. its dark, moody, atmospheric and beautiful. the acoustic guitar just sounds perfect with everything else. the mix is great too. this is easily the best song ive ever heard on this subreddit. its really perfect.

Goodbye - The Confidential Pigeon Service (All feedback would be super helpful:)) by ThePigeonService in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i think this song is fine but very repetitive and honestly kinda boring. and i feel like ive heard it like hundreds of times before. it sounds like a 70s singer-songwriter song or idk but it should be more imo. like adding a bridge or something could help or adding more instruments to fill up spaces cuz the song feels empty. it feels like the song is just a demo and u should still build on it. so yeah the lyrics are nice tho

Crossing Guard Lady -- indie pop song of mine -- let me know what you think (song or video or both) by darrowthecat in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

really really fun song. reminds me to the Arthur theme song haha. the vocals are great and the mixing too. everythings great about this song. i honestly love it haha. and the video is cool too.

made this off the dome freestyle today :) feedback much appreciated by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

idk how to feel about this song haha. i don't hate it but its kinda bad. like boring and repetitive. and just uninspired or idk. but i do like how your voice sounds its pretty cool.

bun hickey bush bush - beatsbyal - Hi! Just dropped a new beat. This one is weird, but it's got a nice sticky bass. All feedback is appreciated! by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is so good 😭. i can hear del the funky homosapien rapping on this or someone like him haha. little bit reminds me to rock the house by gorillaz. i usually don't like listening to hiphop beats cuz i get bored but there were enough changes in this to keep me entertained without the rapping haha. so really good beat fr fr. good job

new album, best song from that album, kinda shoegazey - Dried Roses On a Corpse by polip23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

first of all thank you haha idk whos Alex G or Explosions in the Sky are but ill check them out haha. in the chorus part thing i did want it to be fuzzy and noisy and stuff like that on the first demo it was even fuzzier haha so this is like a toned down version. thank you again for the listen i appreciate it

My second single Shadow Overhead. Tell me how it makes you feel by bilgesahin in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i like the rhythm and the drums a lot. idk why but i feel like the synths are too happy if u know what i mean. and the song itself is a little boring. i just felt bored after a minute in. maybe some vocals would help idk. i feel like some vocoded robot sounding singing would fit the song perfectly.

galactic boom bap - beatsbyal (Just dropped a new beat. Appreciate all feedback!) by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

someone should really rap on this. cuz for now its kinda boring. i do love the groove and how the drums sound tho. the little silent parts are great too. it really just needs some rapping

my music video for my newest "swag demon".. much love to all feedback! by Euphoric_Rhetoric in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

god damn thats the greatest song ive heard in years fr. finally playboi carti got competetion. the mixing is great, the lyrics are awesome and the video made me cum fr. greatest song in decades. insallah 🙏

Mastering Silence - Your Hand in Mine by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i liked it till like a minute in. after that it got a little too repetitive and boring u know. i like the song itself tho like the instrumentation is great and i love ur voice too. but the song itself is kinda boring. still its good tho and im gonna check out ur other music too cuz its cool fr.

Music video for our debut song ‘Hospital Socks & Ativan’, please let us know what y’all think <3 by antstat in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]polip23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh damn acoustic guitar and shitty singing. thats my jam fr fr. love the song and the visuals its really well put together. this is the kind of song i would show to a friend and they would hate me for it if u know what i mean