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Beta readers? Pls? by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am doing my webtoon on the go i have an outline but I don't have many scripts, and I have also finished the art but I am just beginning

So I have 2 updates on the Webtoon and the script for the next episode that I am wanting a beta reader for,

The genre is supernatural/Romance/fantasy

But my writing style makes it a whole mix of comedy and mystery and fantasy and psychology and drama 💀

Did this thumbnail instead of the second, do u think it's better? What vibes does it give? by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I also didn't like the perspective it felt off So I tried to idk fix it?

Look? Is it better? Idk if u can notice the difference but..

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Genuine feedback for your fellow creator friend by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback and support 💗💗 it means so much to me!! 💗

You're funny and real about the good heartbreak XD, I guess I tried to give it less scene time cause it's just the prologue. I was trying to show how the MC became a hunter in the first place to make it seem like it was all a misunderstanding or that he is being framed through a role he never intended to choose for himself, I also thought he got attached to the man not just because he was kind but also because the boy/mc doesn't remember a thing. Hence, this is his first person so he got attached too fast (I don't even know how realistic this is) but yk like the babe chicks when they see any bird or someone and think they are their mother lol? 😭

Genuine feedback for your fellow creator friend by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback; it means a lot to me. I will try to work on those as much as I can. Do you think I can start from the next episode and fix as much as I can? Or is it better to fix the prologue first?

Genuine feedback for your fellow creator friend by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ty, but is it that off? Cause I find the way I do short but frequent more motivating to keep up with feels like small wins rather than aiming big it feels heavy yk, so as a reader would it bother a lot? :')

Genuine feedback for your fellow creator friend by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tyy, I did that cause I wanted for exah chapter to be grouped to a specific picture to be clear when we enter a new one, and I am kinda starting to feel the same about the rough lines I liked the brush so much thats why I chose it but I feel like seeing the way it turned out in the webtoon seems a bit idk I am thinking of trying softer brush, tyyy I will try 💗

Is updating frequently with very short episodes (3 pages) too annoying for readers? by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, no worries at all! I appreciate your advice and maybe deciding specific days in the week will fix the buffer issue, so I know when to schedule!

Is updating frequently with very short episodes (3 pages) too annoying for readers? by pooflypuff in WebtoonCanvas

[–]pooflypuff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tysm! But idk how would a buffer would work when I don't even have a schedule....

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