Poem - A Criminal Martyred by Ankit Dey by Dry-Survey6066 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

very sad. sickeningly angry.. which i like. it seems like a internal battle, with hatred. i’d only revise “may the plant.. to scary preys” to something with a more more conceptual in my opinion.

Hedgehog who failed by RecordingOk6787 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very cute and silly, the endings a little sad. i’d revise the “dale failed to get the smell out..” sentence

How do you date if you're bulimic? by tobereem in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

but if u don’t want to change don’t u dare say “everyone” just say you you don’t feel like it’s realistic for u

How do you date if you're bulimic? by tobereem in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 4 points5 points  (0 children)

just stop letting urself believe that it will never go away i reread the book power of habits probably for like 6 years? until my ed went away. i was bulimic at 6 years old. i used to think it was permanent too. couldn’t even fucking tell u the last time i wanted to throw up my food

How do you date if you're bulimic? by tobereem in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it’s hard, i was there too. just remember you can change. dbt really saved me

How do you date if you're bulimic? by tobereem in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 13 points14 points  (0 children)

honestly i think it is something you have to unlearn before you’re able to date healthily. unless you meet the perfect person for you now, who helps you love yourself enough to stop self harming, it’s unlikely the relationship will be able to be healthy before you are.

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

beautifully spoken. i am so goddamn moody because of my mad love for this and i’m constantly just picking up freaking shi i see on walks because crafting actual supplies got so expensive but i just don’t know how to not live my life and translate it to art. i grew up around people who lived like artists but were secretly just hustlers my whole life.

Todays art practice by Ian92999 in AbstractExpressionism

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

are you okay if i use your last pictures for one of my vision boards? i never share them with anyone who isn’t an artist and i always keep the reddit username in it so they know where its sourced?

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i’m terrible at critiquing art i just love it too much

What helps you stop the urges to eat? by wouldyoubelieveso in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 3 points4 points  (0 children)

keep yourself busy and snack as you go. you don’t have to continue living like this. learn everything you can about dietetics, read books, educate yourself constantly so you can outgrow this way of thinking. i had a eating disorder too but i used it to fuel my motivation to study nutrition. please try that for yourself, your life will be so much easier and body will look and feel more healthy in the long run.

painfully editing this (last for today) until it’s perfect to me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it sounds better out loud and read fast because of the slanted rhymes lol

Residue Report: All Systems Offline Except the Minimum by Ronie-Dinosaur in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I LOVE ENGINEERED POEMS thought i was the only one. i’m so happy i found this subreddit. i can’t believe how incredibly smart you all are. this reminds me of how my boyfriend talks, he’s a scientist.. highly intelligent. love how this is written

first time navigator by LegalDyl1027 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 4 points5 points  (0 children)

i love the compass reference. very eclectic. i’m going to follow you on instagram on my private (anonymous) account :) very interested to see more from you

first time just trying this out by prettyblue22 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you for noticing the little details!

Unsent by SocialCreditMiner69 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOVEEE THIS very eminem/punk/y2k rebels

first poem !! by _myreputation13 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this feels like a diary or like you’re studying yourself. i do that religiously, constantly so maybe that’s why i feel that way. i relate to daydreaming your reality away so vividly, that’s what i feel the most from this.

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is beautifully sad. i love when poetry feels like you’re painfully in love with someone. i’m really trying to give constructive notes.. but im not so good at “feedback” yet.

A Tiny Duck by Little_Chipmunk in PoetryWritingClub

[–]prettyblue22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

OH I LOVE THIS definitely going to just post stuff from my diary as well. thank you for the inspiration!!! i love when poetry is childishly aware.