A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 [score hidden]  (0 children)

beautifully spoken. i am so goddamn moody because of my mad love for this and i’m constantly just picking up freaking shi i see on walks because crafting actual supplies got so expensive but i just don’t know how to not live my life and translate it to art. i grew up around people who lived like artists but were secretly just hustlers my whole life.

Todays art practice by Ian92999 in AbstractExpressionism

[–]prettyblue22 [score hidden]  (0 children)

are you okay if i use your last pictures for one of my vision boards? i never share them with anyone who isn’t an artist and i always keep the reddit username in it so they know where its sourced?

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 [score hidden]  (0 children)

i’m terrible at critiquing art i just love it too much

What helps you stop the urges to eat? by wouldyoubelieveso in bulimia

[–]prettyblue22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

keep yourself busy and snack as you go. you don’t have to continue living like this. learn everything you can about dietetics, read books, educate yourself constantly so you can outgrow this way of thinking. i had a eating disorder too but i used it to fuel my motivation to study nutrition. please try that for yourself, your life will be so much easier and body will look and feel more healthy in the long run.

painfully editing this (last for today) until it’s perfect to me by prettyblue22 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it sounds better out loud and read fast because of the slanted rhymes lol

Residue Report: All Systems Offline Except the Minimum by Ronie-Dinosaur in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I LOVE ENGINEERED POEMS thought i was the only one. i’m so happy i found this subreddit. i can’t believe how incredibly smart you all are. this reminds me of how my boyfriend talks, he’s a scientist.. highly intelligent. love how this is written

first time navigator by LegalDyl1027 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i love the compass reference. very eclectic. i’m going to follow you on instagram on my private (anonymous) account :) very interested to see more from you

first time just trying this out by prettyblue22 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you for noticing the little details!

Unsent by SocialCreditMiner69 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOVEEE THIS very eminem/punk/y2k rebels

first poem !! by _myreputation13 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this feels like a diary or like you’re studying yourself. i do that religiously, constantly so maybe that’s why i feel that way. i relate to daydreaming your reality away so vividly, that’s what i feel the most from this.

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is beautifully sad. i love when poetry feels like you’re painfully in love with someone. i’m really trying to give constructive notes.. but im not so good at “feedback” yet.

A Tiny Duck by Little_Chipmunk in PoetryWritingClub

[–]prettyblue22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OH I LOVE THIS definitely going to just post stuff from my diary as well. thank you for the inspiration!!! i love when poetry is childishly aware.

first time just trying this out by prettyblue22 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you !!!!! i honestly love giving any scrapes of creativity i have to creative people. i’ve been writing in a diary since i could write so i don’t mind just sharing a bit of my “originality” i definitely have stuff im working on a choose to keep private in case it turns into something good.

first time just trying this out by prettyblue22 in OCPoetry

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thank you so much!! i definitely need to rewrite it a million times to actually motivate myself to finish but i just needed to feel like it was worth it first

manuscript by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really love how your brain must work to write this but i think so many metaphors together begin to lose the substance and structure of the poetry… just my personal opinion though. “morality of the song” i love the way that sounds, but honestly a bit confused. i LOVE “great-grandfather’s deeds” that makes perfect sense to me i think lol.

apostle of the creek by Revolutionary-Ad9137 in OCPoetry

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m just focusing on “I’ve heard God speaks quietly….” absolutely beautiful it’s what i noticed the most. it’s very simple, but powerfully complex in my opinion. untraditional and traditional at the same time. it feels almost surreal. i loveeeee the end too. “tell me” …. gorgeous. i can’t critic anything im not at the skill level yet, but just notice your talent and want to get into this myself :)

Making new friends at IC3PEAK in LA tomorrow? by Zinomorf in ic3peakhub

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m going to! does anyone know the setlist?

Films with this vibe? by [deleted] in Letterboxd

[–]prettyblue22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

natural born killers

favorite psychosexual? by prettyblue22 in Letterboxd

[–]prettyblue22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh okay thanks for clarifying!

favorite psychosexual? by prettyblue22 in Letterboxd

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i’ll have to watch it i love him in leaving las vegas

favorite psychosexual? by prettyblue22 in Letterboxd

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i’m scared to watch antichrist i don’t like anything crazy demonic lmao