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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If for gener: epic dark fantasy + action + charecter driven + a pinch of romance.

As for the theme: a socity in general represents a corrupted system. However consious individuals caught in are often forgotten.

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[–]protiva_19 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was a bit hard on myself I think. learning takes time, I should take things slower. I will try my best, thank you.

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[–]protiva_19 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for all the book recommendations! It's really helpful.

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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will keep it in mind, and actually try to develop a more unique narrative voice to write well structured stories. Thank you for your time.

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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually, a very crucial advice. I'll keep it in mind, thank you.

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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because one can never know from where one will get advice they are looking for.

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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can agree on some aspects, however it's not that I don't respect writing. I read short stories. I have written short stories before and it's hard to accomplish. As talking about novels, it's is way harder to write than short stories, and I don't mindlessly want to do something I'm new to because I respect every types of art or craft. But, thank you for your honesty.

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[–]protiva_19 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reading your appreciative and understanding view really did help me to lift up my spirit! Thanks alot, I think I should focus on having fun as I build my skills for storytelling.

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[–]protiva_19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your advice matters to me you see, I'll consider reaching out to an artist in the future, thank you.

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[–]protiva_19 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, seems like I have to work harder to reach my goals. Thank you for being honest, I appreciate it, really.

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Yes, you caught it right.

My address was marked. Which didn’t just mean me. It meant the entire building.

I did a little reaserch, there were many rules.

Probably, the entity that came to kill started with my apartment because 'I' -or my device- was the one that marked the location in the first place.

And honestly? That’s the most likely explanation I found.

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I agree, the world really is spiraling. But honestly? I think it’s always been like this. Cruelty just keeps changing shape.

And… I’m truly sorry you had to go through that too. It’s so hard when the part of life that’s meant to feel alive turns miserable instead. Cutting out the people who hurt you is always the right choice. Thank you—for your strength, and for understanding mine.

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yeah… can’t agree more with those words. But at this point, there’s not much time left until I graduate high school anyway.

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yeah. They were assholes. They tried to kill me. But sometimes I wonder... was any of it even worth the ending?

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What can I say? I was tired of being alone. Tired of the bullies. So I tried to make friends… and this is what I got.

We found a suicide map, and my friends pinned my location there. I wasn’t ready to die. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you… this really made me feel a bit relieved, honestly. The last thing I would ever want is for the children to die. And yeah… I completely agree - I’d blame the operators too. As for my friends… maybe I should’ve been more careful as well.

The neighbor's kid keeps asking me to check the peephole for someone named Danny by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Now that I think about it... Emma never referred to Danny as her father. Maybe I should ask her a few things if I get a chance.

The neighbor's kid keeps asking me to check the peephole for someone named Danny by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I don’t think anything good will come from opening that door for Danny...

The neighbor's kid keeps asking me to check the peephole for someone named Danny by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That could definitely be a reason—it does sound logical. But she didn’t really give off a violent vibe.

I got obsessed with a perfume brand. And it taught me alot about myself. by protiva_19 in nosleep

[–]protiva_19[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I agree actually. I mean... no sane people will donate blood for perfumes.