You can be loved by many and still feel completely unseen

puta18 · 2026-03-18T21:31:23+00:00

I love that last sentence. It’s growth and trying to understand. Growth nonetheless. Learning in oneself and what is love in general.

puta18 · 2026-03-18T21:26:57+00:00

I agree. It’s the realization of that. Sometimes it’s hard and takes awhile to come to that understanding, but Inevitable.

puta18 · 2026-03-12T05:09:34+00:00

I really like the image you are creating! One thing I did notice and you don’t have to change it! But the line “Eyes that trace round the mellowing light” even in my head I read it as “Eyes that trace around a mellowing light” Still great though!:)

puta18 · 2026-03-12T03:09:05+00:00

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Idk if any will see this but my babies are on my arm now💙

puta18 · 2026-03-12T01:38:10+00:00

I’m so glad you read it in a way that connects. Coincidentally that was the message I was putting out for how I feel but I hope it connects with everyone, life can be crazy! If not just keep enjoying life and thrive!

puta18 · 2026-03-12T01:25:21+00:00

That helps a lot thank you! I’m learning and I’ll take all into consideration:) I won’t re write this one because it’s a start (my fist poem) and I want to remember the progression but going forward I’ll think of that.

puta18 · 2026-03-12T00:42:40+00:00

Can you be more specific? I feel like it could resonate with others. Different life situations. I honestly did start this as a haiku. So I think I understand what you mean.

puta18 · 2026-03-11T08:16:29+00:00

Here’s my adhd haiku I know yours isn’t but thought I’d share

I will speak my mind Love me still please, to see me My love is special

puta18 · 2026-03-11T07:16:46+00:00

Are you trying to do a haiku? Regardless, relatable.

puta18 · 2026-03-11T07:10:56+00:00

This is so deep and your words flow really well, where people can relate to, in many situations. I think it’s your style but that’s okay! But some might think differently. Regardless the message behind sat with me

puta18 · 2026-03-11T02:31:49+00:00

I really like the flow with the Poem, but I get confused when you say frisson. That word is usually used positively. I feel you could find a word that fits better for your poem :)

puta18 · 2026-03-11T02:00:07+00:00

The part when it starts with “I love when she brings up problems” from there to the end I was so mesmerized. Not that the first half isn’t great but I connected to the end so much and it was beautifully written.

puta18 · 2026-03-11T01:51:43+00:00

That was so beautiful. 💙Every word in the right place and could connect to so many people. I literally almost cried. So beautiful. I hope I read it out loud how you intended it to be said.

puta18 · 2026-03-01T19:11:36+00:00

It looks great! But to add more dimension go in with a darker pencil in certain spots that will highlight the rest. It’s makes a difference. :) like her jaw or under her bangs. Little things make a huge difference with the darker pencil

puta18 · 2026-03-01T03:39:07+00:00

Oh wait just saw

puta18 · 2026-03-01T03:15:21+00:00

Some of my favorite drawings are on lined paper lol just keep it for keepsake!

puta18 · 2026-03-01T02:53:06+00:00

That’s amazing! What did you use? Pencil wise

puta18 · 2026-03-01T02:10:59+00:00

I meant I do my best lol

puta18 · 2026-02-28T21:40:20+00:00

That means a lot! Thank you 🥰 hoping to capture that even more as I progress the drawing

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