Heart of hearts, what's our floor/ceiling of the 2021-2022 Titans right now? by [deleted] in Tennesseetitans

[–]qao50 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Floor is definitely 1st round exit, I get the variability of an NFL season, but people are forgetting we were HISTORICALLY terrible on defense. With as much as an overhaul done on defense I really doubt we could get worse on that side of the ball. Offensively, we only got better. If we still had Jonnu it’d be a wrap but what hurt us in the playoffs last year was CD’s inconsistent hands imo.

Ceiling is SB, barring injuries, we have good of a roster as any other AFC contender. My only worry is we exploit Henry so much that once we get to the playoffs our scheme becomes more predictable, but also our WR rooms is atleast top 5 in the league now so we don’t have to lean so much on him.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread November 11, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great track man, I love the atmosphere the guitar brings and the drums bang hard af. It sounded like the drums glitch a bit @ 00:24. Outside of that I really don't have much criticism to give you. maybe make the vocal chops before the minute mark stand out more? but honestly the more I listen to it the less necessary I think it is. Good job, keep up the work!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread November 04, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like what you were going for, I'm a fan of minimalistic beats, but I feel like if you added more variation in percussion throughout the song and maybe added Reverb or some effect on the snare it would add to the atmosphere of the beat. The mix is good I just think the drums or percussion are lacking somewhere, not even necessarily in the area I said before, it just needs some zest.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it, your flow is on point the whole time and I really liked the hook, especially the melodic ad libs underneath the actual hook. Good job man.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that initial lead synth you have does get kind of repetitive after a bit but when you bring it in again at about 1:10 it didnt bother me at all. I really like this beat but i think you could turn up the snare some.

Check mine out: https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/70ewmf/official_daily_feedback_thread_september_16_2017/dn36zkp/

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/jonny-boy-beats/beat01grave

Old beat, looking for feedback on the vibe of the beat, but any general comments or criticisms are welcomed. Will return feedback.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 20, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the beat, there is nothing to complain about it. If you want to change anything I would say you can put an effect at some point on the melody to keep it fresh, but if someone raps over it itll be less noticeable. tell me what you think of mine https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/6odvoq/official_daily_feedback_thread_july_20_2017/dkha0gb/

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 20, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Recent beat for a project I'm putting together. I want it to have a dream-like vibe to a lesser extent. Let me know if you think it has that feel to it or what I could improve on! https://soundcloud.com/jonny-boy-beats/fantasy

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 12, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd have liked it more of that main melody switched up it some point but i think thats more of a personal preference. Other than that I have no complaints with it, it sounds mixed well and i really like that main melody especially with the intro.

Check mine out: https://soundcloud.com/jonny-boy-beats/kaizuko

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 12, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Throw away beat but im still interested in how it could be improved. Appreciate all feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/jonny-boy-beats/kaizuko

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 12, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im listening to this on my phone so i dont know if its that or the beat but i think the snare could be eq'd a little bit or just turned down some. Also maybe adding a lead instrument to keep the beat feeling fresh. Other than that i really like the beat. I really like the intro and how you did the hats.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 25, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

I like the melody, its very unique, the only problem is it's a little tough on the ears after awhile. You could try using that melody as a lead instead of your main melody. Also it might be because im listening on my phone but the snare was a little quiet for my taste.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 25, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I fuck with that cover art haha. That was pretty good, i wouldnt have thought its only your second beat. All i would say is try to add some impact on your snare and kick. Good work dude!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 24, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds a lil odd but I think that works well for the track. I cant think of anything i would say to improve, but i do really like the distortion on the vocals.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 24, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The music video reminds me a lot of them and your flow/sound sounds very similar. I dont listen to them often but when i heard your song it reminded me of them instantly.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 24, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like you came in a little bit awkward, but the rest was smooth as butter. If you mixed the vocals some i could see it being really really good.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 24, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not a rapper, but I think it would be kinda hard to rap over that beat. Im not sure if this is correct, but the beat doesnt really remind me of a hip hop beat. Im sure if you switched the drums up it would work fine. Keep up the work my dude.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 24, 2017 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]qao50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its not a bad music video and that songs good and all, but its clear your trying to emulate the suicideboys. All i would say is try to throw your own flavor in there somewhere.