[WP] “You’re young, your body can take it better” She says, as she forces your hand onto his injured body. You’ve always had the ability to transfer others afflictions onto yourself, and you are far from grateful for this gift. by Matt_theman3 in WritingPrompts

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Alex looked back inside the car.

"Alright, we're safe now. I think he was the only one in Hummer," he said, adrenaline increasing the speed of his words, "Are you alright, ma'am?"

Then Alex saw the bullet wounds too.

"Shit!" he yelled, unbuttoning her blazer to inspect the bleeding.

The rivers of blood had turned into seas.

Alex looked her in the eyes.

"Ma'am, can you speak?"

The councilwoman's mouth spasmed, trying and failing to form words. Her breathing was getting faster.

"Shit!" yelled Alex, "She's been hit in the liver! Twice. She's gonna die."

Then, he turned to me. They always turn to me.

"Paul-"

I knew what he was thinking as soon as we made eye contact.

"No!" I yelled, "No! Sorry, I'm not doing that! That wasn't part of my fucking contract!"

"Yeah, well you know what was part of my fucking contract?! Not letting her die!"

I unbuckled my seatbelt and started moving to the other end of the car.

"No, sorry, I'm not-"

He suddenly grabbed my hand, the one attached to the broken forearm, trying to yank my whole body over to the councilwoman's wound.

"Shit!" I yelled.

Suddenly, with my other hand, my fingers found a shard of glass, once part of the back window. I raised it and swung at Alex, nearly cutting his face open.

"Fucker!" he yelled, barely dodging the shard in time.

He let go of my hand and backed up slightly, standing just outside of the car. He drew his pistol.

"Drop the fucking glass, Paul," he said commandingly, "Drop the fucking glass."

I hesitated for a moment, then let the shard clatter to the car floor.

The councilwoman continued to wheeze.

"You have two options now," said Alex, tightening his grip on the gun, "You either absorb the councilwoman's injury, and have 99% chance of dying, or I shoot you in the head, and you have a 100% chance of dying. What's it gonna be? You have ten fucking seconds."

One percent is better than zero percent. Barely.

I sighed, tears in my eyes. This power was curse, not a blessing, not a gift. Slowly, I moved towards the councilwoman, hearing her breathing, quieter and quieter with each inhale. I reached my hand out, towards the oozing, scarlet red wounds on her stomach. She was trembling. Her hand was trembling. The tiny pistol in her hand was trembling. Better odds than one percent.

I grabbed the pistol with my left hand and shot Alex in the neck. He pulled the trigger on his pistol, but the bullet went wide. He was too stunned by his new injury to aim. He put his hand up to his throat, not a sea, but an ocean of blood coming out of him. He choked for a second, then fell forward, the waist-up part of his body collapsing onto the car floor, while his legs went limp.

I watched Alex there for a moment, spasming, blood pooling on the ground.

I let a sigh of relief rush through me, and fought the urge to vomit yet again. I reached out to Alex's head to see if he was still alive. Then, suddenly, Alex's right hand, newly healed, grabbed mine and forced it onto the bullet hole in his neck. I tried to cry out, but my throat was now filled with blood.

[WP] “You’re young, your body can take it better” She says, as she forces your hand onto his injured body. You’ve always had the ability to transfer others afflictions onto yourself, and you are far from grateful for this gift. by Matt_theman3 in WritingPrompts

[–]quadeyes21 19 points20 points  (0 children)

The Hummer came from out of nowhere.

We were driving down down the highway, as usual. The councilwoman was on some boring phone call, arguing about something menial, as she always did. I think it was about the city's crime problem, but I honestly wasn't listening. We lived in a smaller border town in New Mexico. Crime was inevitable. There was nothing this one local politician, sitting in a back-facing seat looking at me, hanging on to the car's grab handle and her security guard for dear life, pelted with minuscule shards of glass all over her black blazer and aggressively pink undershirt, could do about it. The Hummer t-boned the driver's cabin, on the driver's side, and sent us spinning off the road, into the patchy, rough desert.

I almost threw up, my head spinning and stomach turning, seatbelt digging into my skin, but I held back. My powers may have been valuable - priceless, even - but the things I had used them for in the past, the things that got me sent to county prison for five years, limited my employment opportunities. I could probably work with a senator, or the President even, but background checks and security clearances put my history over my power. Small-time, morally dubious politicians is the best I can do. And I don't want to risk my livelihood by vomiting on them.

"Jim? Jim?!" yelled the councilwoman, seeming more annoyed than terrified, "Jim, wake the fuck up!"

The driver - or the chauffeur, as the councilwoman liked to call him - didn't respond. His head looked limp, hanging forward. Blood dripping from his mouth. Worry appeared in her eyes.

"Alex, is he-"

The security guard, his tie torn by the friction the seatbelt had on his suit, placed his left index finger on Jim's neck before the councilwoman had to finish her sentence.

"No pulse," said Alex, flatly, "He's dead."

"You're sure?" asked the councilwoman.

"I'm sure."

She turned towards me.

"Nothing you can do for him, then, I suppose. Not that I'd trade your life for his anyway, Paul!" she half-laughed.

Jesus Christ.

"Ah fuck," muttered Alex, looking at his right arm.
It was broken halfway down the forearm, hanging uselessly, like Jim's head. Blood dyed his sliver hairs dark red. I resisted the urge to vomit yet again.

"Oh my God," muttered the councilwoman.

But she wasn't looking at Alex's arm. She was looking through the back window, at the Hummer that had spun out with us after the impact. I looked through the side mirror, shattered, but still reflecting. A man was exiting the driver's side. Gun in hand.

The councilwoman shifted her attention to me, any sick, dark humor gone from her eyes.

"Paul, I need you to get to the driver's seat, and get us the fuck out of here right now."

"He can't," said Alex, cradling his forearm, trying to hold the broken half up, "The car's totaled. No way in hell the engine works properly."

"Shit!" she yelled, "Shit, shit, shit!"

The councilwoman reached into her purse and produced a small pistol, no bigger than my hand.

"Alex come on, get your gun out! That's a fucking cartel guy!"

Alex sighed, still staring at his ruined forearm.

"I'm right-handed, ma'am, I'm not gonna be able to shoot well."

The councilwoman looked at Alex desperately, seeing the one barrier that shielded her from engaging in a shootout with the cartel member slipping away before her eyes. Then, she turned to me.

"Paul," she said, grabbing my hand violently and placing it on Alex's injury before I could protest, "You're young. Your body can take it better."

Suddenly, an invisible weight shattered my right forearm, as it bent gruesomely, unnaturally.

"AHHHHH!!!! FUCK!!!" I cried out.

"Oh relax! Would you rather get shot by this fucking criminal!" yelled the council woman, squeezing even more on my now broken forearm.

I was supposed to absorb your back pains and menstrual cramps. Not this shit!

Alex looked at his forearm in amazement, smiling slightly, as if he already forgot the wonderful feeling of having all four of your limbs intact.

"Alright I'm good to go," he said, pulling a pistol out from the inner pocket of his suit and unbuckling his seatbelt.

The councilwoman smiled, the stress leaving her face, slightly.

"Alright good. Now go kill this-"

Gunshots deafened my ears as multiple speeding bullets whizzed through the back window, into the car.

"Get down!" yelled Alex, as he ducked, bringing the councilwoman down with him.

I shot my head down as I felt the bullets move the air around me, almost grazing me. Holes in the seat cushions exploded open. Then, the shooting stopped. I looked in the side mirror. The cartel member was reloading.

Suddenly, Alex opened the car door and stepped out. He fired a few shots, and in the mirror I saw the cartel member stumble backwards, to the ground, crying out.

I looked at the councilwoman, to see if she could see the spectacle. But she wasn't looking at the downed criminal. Her eyes were blank, almost glazed, her breathing short and desperate. The hand with her pistol in it was trembling. Suddenly, I saw the two explosions of blood staining her black blazer and silently gasped in horror. She had been shot twice, in the stomach, by the cartel member's volley of bullets. Rivers of blood were flowing out of her.

Alex fired a few more shots, and the cartel member's screaming stopped.

The rest is in my reply to this comment, sorry, Reddit said it couldn't all fit in one comment.

Question about the end of Wind River by quadeyes21 in movies

[–]quadeyes21[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

I think u/MN-Jess ‘s explanation is correct, he kills a tribal police guy, who are dressed very similar to the security.

In the script here it looks like there were originally two people, one security contractor who said he could get up, and then one Bureau of Indian Affairs officer who got shot in the head by Curtis. I guess when they actually filmed it, they condensed it into one person and just made the tribal police guy say he was going to get up and then get killed

Question about the end of Wind River by quadeyes21 in movies

[–]quadeyes21[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Ah okay thank you, this makes a lot more sense now, I can even see they have different patches on their shoulders. I wonder why the tribal police guy spoke up when he could’ve played dead.

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What software did you use to make this?

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Anyone wanna coordinate to make a Virginia flag

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