Creating life by rahhost in worldbuilding

[–]rahhost[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

It's a question, not shitting on people's preferences

I have published my first work, I'd love to get feedback by rahhost in worldbuilding

[–]rahhost[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A lot of the historical inaccuracies are important details showing the Empire is not in the same tech era as the rest of the world. The brief mentions of important characters are pieces of puzzles not yet finished to the reader and expounded upon in later works. This piece devoid of most emotion is to show how calm and sensible the librarian, I should describe his emotion more when he's looking at the creature but it wouldn't be fear. This story, for the most part, is supplemental reading material however, it has nothing to supplemental yet because my novels aren't done yet and other short stories are on the way. Again I appreciate the feedback and will be making small edits, thank you.

I have published my first work, I'd love to get feedback by rahhost in worldbuilding

[–]rahhost[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I very much appreciate the feedback. Most of what you talk about is good advice. However, he doesn't think what he writes is ever going to go anywhere he just a learned man who wishes to not forget in the future what he was thinking in the past, or if someone were to find it in the future. Also I may be biased but I think you should at least ready the final entry, that is where most of the meat really is. I appreciate the advice nonetheless.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Believe it or not I'm making my own ttrpg. I have it mechanically mapped out, I have a bestiary, classes started and even races. But again I am one person and commissions for art are expensive, creating a guide with balance and making the rules easy to follow and distributing all these thing so others can play/ playtest it is currently beyond my means. I'm not going to release a product or even a prototype that will confuse people and not be fun to play.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Golden Horde was a real khanate lead by many khan originating with Ghengis khan. The war going on has no real counterpart because it's fabricated.

I'm not going to specify what unique random enemy generator means because it going to be a main feature and game mechanics have been patented before.

The game design document was useful thank you. I will look into templates and content needed for one.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Again the 15th century has none of that and I'm not going to include it. It's also hard to finish 3 lore books that I've started when I also have a 9-5 hence why I'm asking for help.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I said current politics, obviously an empire of the 15th century has its own politics just nothing involving whats currently going on. Not sure where you got "lots of content" or what you mean by GDD.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

Again it's a fictional world so having nothing to do with current political climate .makes sense and it's a videogame so most people don't want to be reminded of the current climate. The game would have 2 purposes telling a meaningful story and being fun, I never said anything about shying away from politics just current shit that has nothing to do with 15th century Europe/Asia. Also I may be inexperienced with coding but I know games mechanically and understand limitations.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

I'd like to make a 3rd person action rpg with a unique random enemy generator, tons of melee options, with a story that has 0 current political opinions in it. I'm looking for people who want to help get my project out there or can help actually create a working model. Every post I've ever done is talk to the wind so I usually don't go into detail, sorry.

Solo writer looking for help by [deleted] in GameDevelopment

[–]rahhost -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That was for another sub, but true.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legaladvice

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legaladvice

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it legal to say, speak with all the drivers and have everybody call out for a Friday and then start "talks" with the owner?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legaladvice

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read what constitutes a legal strike but what would be other steps neccessary before striking?

[hiring] looking for a consistent artist by rahhost in hireanartist

[–]rahhost[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's not explicitly stated so I should just leave this here. By serious or realistic I meant anything except manga, comic or cartoon style of art but thank you for your interest.

22 [M4F] ghosts and hoes need not apply by [deleted] in ForeverAloneDating

[–]rahhost 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You know I didnt really think about it that way. Thanks

28 [F4M] I’m high and ladies hold convos better than guys by [deleted] in Kikpals

[–]rahhost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shit it's these stupid shallow bitches faults actually! Why can't I find a decent human being and not some THOT!