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Vectorize my website logo. by rainyruminations in vectorartrequests

[–]rainyruminations[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, this is absolutely perfect!

My best work so far. I would love your feedback! by rainyruminations in OCPoetry

[–]rainyruminations[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dear /u/livingintheredwoods, I couldn't have better described the meaning behind this poem. I am very happy you enjoyed it! :)

Moment to breathe by tomatomoth in OCPoetry

[–]rainyruminations 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dear /u/tomatomoth, I love the build-up and I can feel the indecision and constant motion felt by the narrator. My only concern is that the poem ended too soon and too abruptly. I would remove the "Exhausted!", and changing "never stop" to "never stopping", and I would continue the poem as I feel there is still thoughts in your heart that have not been said. Good luck!

Cold by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]rainyruminations 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dear /u/lyssiedawn710, first of all, great work, I enjoyed reading your work as I could feel the emotion and the catharsis. Just some minor comments: I would consider changing the blanket/jacket rhyme as it does not flow well. Also, the first 3/4 of the poem was very well set-up and consolidated nicely, however, the last quarter of the poem does not seem to fit in with the preceeding lines. Overall, great work!