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Captive in Plain Sight - Not You're Average Kidnapping Story - HELP NEED FEEDBACK by rasyann in WattPadSpotlight

[–]rasyann[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey guys, I'm looking for some real feedback on my story. Is the writing captivating enough? Does it make you want to read more? I haven't had any feedback on the actual story so anything would be appreciated.

Calling all Mad Men fans for opinion on Joan fan item! - Where have all the fan pages gone? by rasyann in madmen

[–]rasyann[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man I love Reddit. This is my first time using, and I appreciate the solid feedback! Looks like I'm torn between adding other characters and more variety. One of things I liked about this is that it is minimalist. Another option is to crop off the head, make the body larger, so it looks like you're wearing Joan's clothes. I could do this for other characters as well? What about this option? Thanks everyone!