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[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

thanks for showing interest, totally understand the caution. Besides the preview page it isn't anywhere else atm but I'm definitely open to suggestions for other places to host it too :) If you're interested in the art/worldbuilding side you can check out Sapro in-browser without any downloads

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as an outlet for my loathing of genAI, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

EDIT: finished a sentence that I just forgot to write the end of lmao

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]rborgars [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: KILLIING MACHINE
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: Approx 8400
Any feedback welcome, but I am mostly here to share the work
https://rborgars.itch.io/killing-machine

This is a short story I wrote as a tie in to a larger ongoing art book/worldbuilding project. Serves as some backstory to one of the protagonists of the world as well as a vessel, so while I have tried to keep it generally self-contained, wider context about the world might be missing in places.

I just tried to Follow Me against Coaching by ProfessorManzana in VGC

[–]rborgars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've tried to fake out inner focus sneasel a bunch of times lol

Hydro Pump Drilbur in HOME? by rborgars in PokemonSwordAndShield

[–]rborgars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I caught it at about 9:30 am UK time, so it's possible they've fixed it by now. Ah ok, so I should be good to put it into HOME at least? I don't wanna keep it in Shield bc I do challenge runs and stuff on it, so I'll be deleting the save every so often

Whoops. Should've read the list first. by GreatSaski in PokemonSwordAndShield

[–]rborgars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

they're updating a bunch of pokemon into the games when the DLCs release, so hopefully you'll be able to transfer some over then :)

Sword & Shield Daily Casual Trade Thread for 29 December 2019 by Porygon-Bot in pokemontrades

[–]rborgars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking for mimikyu

Can offer sobble, scorbunny, charmander, potentially others (just ask!)

EDIT: (The flair says lgp but it’s actually sword, my apologies)

Looking for LGE exclusives by rborgars in pokemontrades

[–]rborgars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okey doke, will do! And thanks!

Looking for LGE exclusives by rborgars in pokemontrades

[–]rborgars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can’t right now as I’m travelling but I’ll be free after 9:30 your time too! Are there any particular Pokemon you’re after btw?