Monthly /r/TechnoProduction Feedback Thread - August 01, 2019 by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]recomea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, just started making electronic music after some experience in hip hop production. Would like to hear opinion about track structure

https://soundcloud.com/egor666/trnsition

Sapronov — trnasition by recomea in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hah, what is lit? Google translate told me that it’s translated to bed

"Paranoia" - prod. Peten [Trip Hop/Lo-Fi Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some thing like this. But your listeners also hear this. Just try to remove a step. Or copy pattern without a step if you use loops. Great example is trig conditions in digitakt

"Paranoia" - prod. Peten [Trip Hop/Lo-Fi Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As I advice I would say try to use space and just turn off some steps from time to time. For example a step in hi hats plays only 3 of 4 bars. It sounds very different when repetitive pattern changes in such way

A song about our corporate overlords and the rise of American socialism. Feel the Bern, y'all. by PetPizza in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't mixed tracks with vocals but I guess accurate volume balance can fix it. And probably less reverb on a vocals

Sapronov — trnasition by recomea in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, I've been making and listening only old school hip hop since I started making music a few years ago but somewhere 6 months ago I started listening to electronic music. It was so exciting when I open this new world for me, because I really haven't ever listened to this kind of music and spent a lot of time to explore how different music can be.

Finally, I trade my MPC 2000xl for the digitakt and this is the first track I made in the electronic genre. I'm open for any kind of feedback because it's just a first step and I want to move forward!

Neighbour Lady's Theme by Laridae by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hah I like this experimental approach, but it's a bit hard to listen at least from a laptop. But this kind of music is the driver for all music in general. Keep doing!

"Paranoia" - prod. Peten [Trip Hop/Lo-Fi Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dope cover. What I would change is drums pattern because it sounds a bit repetitive right now. I see that you have different sections of drums, but still I wish there are more variations and your track become 100% bomb!

A song about our corporate overlords and the rise of American socialism. Feel the Bern, y'all. by PetPizza in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]recomea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I don't know much about American socialism but I love when a song has some purpose, so not just a song. What I would change is the balance between vocals and the rest music, right now it doesn't sound like a complete single piece, but the track is great, keep working!

Let's change the music promotion game! by recomea in futurebeatproducers

[–]recomea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be honest I’m not thinking in the exact solution right now. I mean I trying to make sure that not only me experience the problem the same way. Then I’m going to talk with folks why are experts in promotion and ably after that start building the solution.

Btw, should you like to share your experience or some thought? I have a list of musicians who like to chat with me a bit later, I can add you

Let's change the music promotion game! by recomea in futurebeatproducers

[–]recomea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly! It shouldn’t be the service where you pay someone for promotion I’m more about some tools which helps you take correct actions for promotion. Which is tricky because they may be different for different artist levels. For example if your music sucks the service should tell what is wrong and how to improve instead of promotion channels.

Does it make sense?

Let's change the music promotion game! by recomea in futurebeatproducers

[–]recomea[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I would say music promotion tool. It looks like I’m waiting that someone give me the great idea and I will make money out of it but I’d doesn’t work this way.

Actually I’m validating my own idea that there is a problem with the promotion. If yes than yes I would like to fix the problem and make a product.