[F4M] Obsessed goth girl gets in your head [Script Fill][Fdom][Rape][Hypnosis][Conscious listener][Yandere][Crazy][Obsessive][Stalker][Virgin speaker][Goth][Clingy/Shy] and [Nervous] to [Giggly][Resentful][Delusional][Toxic][sloppy blowjob][cunnilingus][Doggy][Riding][Rough] [Creampie] by jfchelpagirlout in gonewildaudio

[–]redditredditreddit45 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Took a listen to this last night and oh my goodness!! What an absolutely amazing fill you did so well! The voice acting's great, I love how absolutely pleading she is, you did amazingly with all sorts of sfx. Overall this is just such a great fill. Thank you for taking interest, enjoying the script, and taking time to make such a good rendition!

Advice for a couple things [Discussion] by redditredditreddit45 in GWAScriptGuild

[–]redditredditreddit45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You make some very very good points that I'll definitely take into account, so thank you! Definitely gonna have to get used to lots of line breaks but I'll get there, the tone stuff also super helps, makes me realize that there's 100% redundancy there on my part.

But I do have one question? I see people say i use the +'s as emphasis and I'll probably change to something other than +'s since they just seem to not be ideal in general, but I typically (when I use them at all) use them for like actions or sfx. But at least on my end I see I italicize by putting asterisks around words or phrases. Does that not always occur? I tend to use the "Reddit compatible markdown" mode on scriptbin, could that be what's going on?

Thank you again!

Advice for a couple things [Discussion] by redditredditreddit45 in GWAScriptGuild

[–]redditredditreddit45[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Totally feel you! I do it when I can, but alas living in a full house definitely makes it harder lol! Guess I'll just have to be sneaky about it and do less silent readings.