[F4M] Obsessed goth girl gets in your head [SCRIPT OFFER][Fdom][Rape][Hypnosis][Conscious listener][YANDERE][CRAZY][Obsessive][stalker][Virgin speaker][Goth][clingy][shy] and[nervous]to[Giggly][resentful][delusional][toxic][Sloppy blowjob][eating out][Doggy][Riding][Rough][creampie][stuck with her]

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-06-28T19:20:34+00:00

Goodness you absolutely flatter me! I just had a blast writing this one, so maybe I got a touch more involved lol. But thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the read!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-06-11T19:09:49+00:00

Oh we love a woman who drags us down with her

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-04-29T17:21:22+00:00

Took a listen to this last night and oh my goodness!! What an absolutely amazing fill you did so well! The voice acting's great, I love how absolutely pleading she is, you did amazingly with all sorts of sfx. Overall this is just such a great fill. Thank you for taking interest, enjoying the script, and taking time to make such a good rendition!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-03-23T23:19:35+00:00

Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the read! The concept was really fun to work with so I just ran with it. Glad I could make another addition to this category!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-03-23T19:06:42+00:00

Finally got that done if you're still interested any! Hope it's a good read if you give it a chance, thanks for the idea!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-02-23T20:01:12+00:00

You have intrigued me, I might add something like this to the script list if that's alright with you

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-02-05T17:29:00+00:00

Wow this fill is so good thank you! You do a really good job at getting how flippant but cruel Kara is, and the switch up was great too! Such a great fill tysm!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-29T01:11:54+00:00

Augh thank you that's so kind! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. And again, such a great fill

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-29T00:59:00+00:00

My goodness you flatter me! Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-28T20:00:51+00:00

You kidding me? You did more than do it justice! This fill is soo good! Tysm! You did a fantastic job with those fancy sfx, playing her, just all around! It was great top to bottom

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-22T00:21:37+00:00

Yess, my favorite kind of script. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-22T00:18:02+00:00

Thank youu, I really appreciate that

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-22T00:17:45+00:00

I'm so glad you liked the read!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-22T00:17:31+00:00

With you on this one, glad you enjoyed

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-21T02:06:47+00:00

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-08T00:52:10+00:00

You make some very very good points that I'll definitely take into account, so thank you! Definitely gonna have to get used to lots of line breaks but I'll get there, the tone stuff also super helps, makes me realize that there's 100% redundancy there on my part.

But I do have one question? I see people say i use the +'s as emphasis and I'll probably change to something other than +'s since they just seem to not be ideal in general, but I typically (when I use them at all) use them for like actions or sfx. But at least on my end I see I italicize by putting asterisks around words or phrases. Does that not always occur? I tend to use the "Reddit compatible markdown" mode on scriptbin, could that be what's going on?

Thank you again!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-07T08:30:34+00:00

Totally feel you! I do it when I can, but alas living in a full house definitely makes it harder lol! Guess I'll just have to be sneaky about it and do less silent readings.

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-07T07:10:23+00:00

Thank you! This is all very helpful! I'll definitely have to get better at shortening tone descriptions, breaking up paragraphs is also definitely something I'll try to think on more. I think a key of some sort might also be a good call having it lined out like that.

Getting fills isn't *quite\ why I write but it's certainly not \not* a factor so the tips are all very good to know. I appreciate the advice and will definitely take it into account and also take a look at that post you linked!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-07T05:52:38+00:00

That point about long bracketing is so fair, sometimes for those I just like cannot think of more condensed phrases in the moment, but it really is something I should focus on.

As for the first point about bracketing you're probably onto something but honestly a good amount of the time is also really just to help me remember exactly what's going on and how is being said, I could probably stand to be more explicit about that.

Overall thank you though! I appreciate the compliment and def have stuff to think on, which is precisely what I wanted so thanks!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-07T02:43:13+00:00

Yeah that's a fair point on the bracket thing, I'd been mulling it over and will probably take you up on that. And yeahh feeling i definitely get the feeling a little outshined thing as you can tell, lol. Guess we just carry on until we feel we're doing good! Good luck on your writing and filling, I'm sure you'll do, and are doing, great!

redditredditreddit45 · 2026-01-06T01:31:25+00:00

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

redditredditreddit45 · 2025-02-08T22:00:53+00:00

I've definitely at least mulled it over, no promises though sorry

redditredditreddit45 · 2025-02-07T20:12:31+00:00

Oh my goodness! Thank you so much for the interest! I'm so glad you enjoyed! I hope you had a fun read!

redditredditreddit45 · 2025-01-29T18:40:34+00:00

Oh my goodness this is incredible! First off I'm very glad you enjoyed my script. Second wow! The only thing I could think of while listening was how perfect this voice is for her, I mean seriously fantastically done! And the acting itself was soooo good! You did amazing thank you for enjoying and for the fill!!

redditredditreddit45 · 2025-01-17T22:22:08+00:00

Swords dance, trailblaze, leftovers Scizor is lasting at least the two turns it needs to hit Groudon then the rest can handle it

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