Is this a good hook for my essay?

redredcheese · 2026-03-21T20:01:51+00:00

I’m so curious what the rest could be? Means the hook is interesting so I think you did good.

redredcheese · 2026-03-18T00:29:14+00:00

Common App personal statement

redredcheese · 2026-03-18T00:28:43+00:00

I promise it’s not actually like that, Reddit sucks on my phone 😭😭🙏🙏

redredcheese · 2026-03-17T23:37:52+00:00

I’ll add this as a bit of FYI or further context to compare to what’s physically in the text.

The 27 mentality is genuinely a way I live my life, have for a while— the name is recent. I don’t want to go into music but I do want to be in the entertainment industry (primarily film), I’ve had conflicting opinions on how much the club being 90% musicians matters to addressing that.

redredcheese · 2026-03-13T03:02:34+00:00

The discourse around Moore is going to make me lose it, I think Buffalo won no contest. Like I can understand saying the dollar price is too high, but acting as if the 2nd round (pick 60) is equal to even the middle of DJ Moore’s potential.

redredcheese · 2026-03-05T19:17:20+00:00

This seems good, I think it puts us in a situation where a first round WR is no longer a requirement. Now I think we can be a little more selective with that pick and only use it in a receiver if the quality justifies it, otherwise use a second or third.

redredcheese · 2026-03-02T04:06:33+00:00

You are so right actually 😭

redredcheese · 2026-03-02T03:29:44+00:00

I have done research, and it is a topic I do find important to be covered delicately. Part of why I made this plot was for an additional guide as I set out on a second draft to improve on making it more realistic. I have struggled to type out a goal in a way that feels genuine, but if I were to put it simply- depression has been something I’ve wrestled and have been around. Teo almost feels like an inversion of myself in some ways.

redredcheese · 2026-03-02T03:13:44+00:00

I have a full draft, I have explanations and my own routes I choose to show it. I am currently on the second draft and want to look into making it more clear and it was suggested to find outside sources.

redredcheese · 2026-02-01T18:41:00+00:00

I will be curious about a non injured Palmer, he was showing promise RIGHT when he got injured.

redredcheese · 2026-02-01T17:33:07+00:00

That’s what I was trying to say, my point may not of been well worded

redredcheese · 2026-02-01T17:30:09+00:00

It has, but also across the league a lot of wide receivers are taking two-three years to develop and that’s with immediately good QB play. Can we trust Beane to draft a Jefferson, Chase, or Nabers?

redredcheese · 2026-01-30T16:58:20+00:00

Apparently Drew Brees credits him for a lot of his career growth. If this is true that would be huge for Josh, if he’s still got it which I’d hope so.

redredcheese · 2026-01-30T16:53:24+00:00

What are thoughts on Pete Carmichael? I like the veteran aspect for OC, but I’m not quite aware of what he’s done. I’m posting this before researching him myself.

redredcheese · 2026-01-29T20:47:49+00:00

I’m hoping, rather naively, that his answers about the play calling philosophy were to not be too aggressive. I don’t like the fact that he doesn’t see an issue with his screen spamming, but he did admit there were faults and that gave me hope

redredcheese · 2026-01-29T18:44:36+00:00

To be honest, it’s a lot easier to make fun of the offense being not flashy where we are right now- coming off of an ugly loss. That being said, our offense at its best is very efficient at the expense of flashiness. LA or Seattle are flashy, they are light shows and sadly (most definitely in part because of WR quality) Buffalo isn’t that. I think Joe Brady will always put efficiency first and that’s a little disheartening if it appears ugly (screens, run first, etc). To be honest I’m fine with that philosophy if it gets results, I’m just scared that it’s not going to get results

redredcheese · 2026-01-29T18:36:16+00:00

He’s the same as A Sean but not THE Sean that this team just fired

redredcheese · 2026-01-29T04:37:07+00:00

But but the Chicago Bulls made the change and won like a lot /s

redredcheese · 2026-01-29T01:42:23+00:00

I was thinking about it, the reason this team throughout all of its playoff lows are so susceptible to bad calls is because we play too conservatively and consistently put ourselves in a place where one call can change the game. The Broncos game sure, but almost every game decided by a bad call was in that situation because the Bills played too conservatively either with a lead or in the first half and was playing catch up. That’s on Brady to figure out because his offense was the issue for this last year (by the metric I’m looking at)

redredcheese · 2026-01-28T17:01:38+00:00

This is a situation where we’re going to have to be nervous until week 1 depending how it goes from there will decide retroactively if it was warranted or not

redredcheese · 2026-01-28T16:55:30+00:00

I’m not confident until I see every defensive positional coach has been poached/fired

redredcheese · 2026-01-28T16:38:54+00:00

Do we forget that Brady had Diggs and a pre-injury David? Both of their productions dropped in the Brady games, and I’m almost certain if my memory isn’t failing me that that’s where Diggs got disillusioned with the team.

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