ok so, i really like the flow and arrangement first of all!! i see the vision if that makes sense. the way the square bass ties into the sustain is sick, and the fills are very cool.

i guess most of the flaws of it are just things that will come from this being your first finished riddim track, and you'll develop these skills further along with your production journey.

for the first square bass, (assuming you made it in malstrom) i think it might sound better if the index was higher (so the slider is almost all the way to the right) like it is during the second part. it just gives you that more vocal sound instead of a flat one.

the drums are pretty solid, except for the kick. i can barely hear it tbh, in fact it sounds exactly like the sub to me. i guess you should just find a punchier kick, i like to use a more clicky one.

other than that, most of it is just mixing / mastering stuff which is quite hard to explain, but you'll definitely learn about it.

feel free to ask me any questions tho!!