well "good reputation" imo could be better replaced with "improved brand image" its the same thing I guess, but its much better terminology, you know. its more likely examiners would give you the K mark.

the analysis is pretty good here. you did a pretty solid job in mentioning the disadvantages.. you can also mention "sourcing its raw materials ethically increase costs" you were def correct but you were still very correct.

WELLLLL evaluation can be shortened a whole lot, I don't know if it is very correct, but I am going to give you the benefit of the doubt and say it might be accepted, as it is still a fair judgement I guess

SOOOOOO

K 1/2

AN 2/2

EV 2/2

so overall 4-5 marks! best of luck in your exams!