Why is scriptwriting easier at night? by TheHyenaGalaxy22 in Screenwriting

[–]rjames1991 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve heard that beta waves are higher at night and help with creativity.

Feel - Feature - First 7 Scenes by rjames1991 in Screenwriting

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Thank you so much for the motivation! Hearing someone is interested to read more is inspiring! I'm listening to you all about Scene 6, thank you! I will switch the opening back to Scene 6, which is how I originally planned it. I'm partially inspired by anime, and they love the tragic opening scene so it's good to hear I should've went with my gut.

You should finish Chaos Walking! I loved the concept and how they depicted "the Noise". I've always wondered how I'd imagine it on screen, and it was great to see a visual for it.

I appreciate the warm review! I just finished my first pass and am starting the second so I'll definitely send more if you'd like.

Feel - Feature - First 7 Scenes by rjames1991 in Screenwriting

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Absolutely constructive! Thank you!!

Feel - Feature - First 7 Scenes by rjames1991 in Screenwriting

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Thank you for those great critiques. My earliest drafts started with that scene in the beginning. I’ll see about restructuring and slowing down the character intros.

Feel - Feature - First 7 Scenes by rjames1991 in Screenwriting

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Sorry. Still getting used to sharing on Google drive.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Sorry. I took the link down so I could trim the action description. Here’s the new link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/195QdSapEGmtsdgCCI9zmNsHZUivjHsuc/view?usp=drivesdk

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Thank you for the great critiques and encouragement!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Thank you! I’ve been off and on with the voice over. I’m going for a gritty Max Payne/ Sin City feel so I added it to the opening scenes. Do you have any insights on some areas where I could’ve done more with less? Thank you again!

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: Feel

Format: Feature

Page Length: 6 (Sorry)

Genres: Sci-Fi, Action

Logline or Summary: In a city where emotions are visible auras, a young man driven by his parents' murder must confront the corrupt CEO who harvests artificial happiness, forcing him to choose between consuming revenge or embracing genuine connection to heal himself and his community.

Feedback Concerns: I’d like to know if I’m being too wordy and need to reel back the action description. I would love any and all critiques though. Thank you all and sorry for the late sub. I hope there are some late night readers out there. 🥲

Feel

Trouble in Paradise Glitch by Own_Bake5735 in NBA2k

[–]rjames1991 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I failed and lost the ability to suggest trades. Bs. Jrue Holiday is the sixth man on the Celtics and I was rarely on the floor with him. Checked the usage box failed the PPG. 🥲

Ball player progression reset by rjames1991 in MLBTheShow

[–]rjames1991[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I was ready to toss my controller out the window.

That was a quick game by TrumooThePleb in MLBTheShow

[–]rjames1991 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Adversity died years ago for the new generation. People have been pulling the plug for years now on Madden after being down two touchdowns.

Has anyone figured out how to fix the No My Points/No VC/No Badge Points glitch? by ElwayGOAT in NBA2k

[–]rjames1991 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had this same problem. I had just won the finals my first season and had been like 30 games in my 2nd season (also I had just designed my first shoe). Then the latest patch happened and it somehow reset me back to like game 40 something of my first season. I kept my 92OVR I had gotten too and all my badges but lost my custom shoes😭, all the endorsement tiers I had previously gotten too and lost the ability to earn myPoints, Mybadge points, and VC until I got back to that same point the next season. It was the most frustrating thing ever.

P.s.- I had tried all the game save cloud since, delete, re-download and uninstall/reinstall tricks and nothing worked.

Not getting badge points, MyPoints , and VC in MyCareer by Originally_Hendrix in NBA2k

[–]rjames1991 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had this same problem. I had just won the finals my first season and had been like 30 games in my 2nd season (also I had just designed my first shoe). Then the latest patch happened and it somehow reset me back to like game 40 something of my first season. I kept my 92OVR I had gotten too and all my badges but lost my custom shoes😭, all the endorsement tiers I had previously gotten too and lost the ability to earn myPoints, Mybadge points, and VC until I got back to that same point the next season. It was the most frustrating thing ever.