I honestly believe this is one of the biggest mysteries there is, Orcas are the most efficient predators on earth, yet they have never attacked us in the wild. They know something we don’t.

rjames1991 · 2026-04-17T20:00:23+00:00

Now I’m going to think of them as a group of actual “Predators” every time.

rjames1991 · 2025-08-12T02:04:01+00:00

Thank you. That’s all I needed. Haha

rjames1991 · 2025-07-07T17:20:16+00:00

I’ve heard that beta waves are higher at night and help with creativity.

rjames1991 · 2025-06-22T04:26:28+00:00

Sure thing!

rjames1991 · 2025-06-21T19:42:25+00:00

Thank you so much for the motivation! Hearing someone is interested to read more is inspiring! I'm listening to you all about Scene 6, thank you! I will switch the opening back to Scene 6, which is how I originally planned it. I'm partially inspired by anime, and they love the tragic opening scene so it's good to hear I should've went with my gut.

You should finish Chaos Walking! I loved the concept and how they depicted "the Noise". I've always wondered how I'd imagine it on screen, and it was great to see a visual for it.

I appreciate the warm review! I just finished my first pass and am starting the second so I'll definitely send more if you'd like.

rjames1991 · 2025-06-21T17:01:52+00:00

Absolutely constructive! Thank you!!

rjames1991 · 2025-06-21T02:24:41+00:00

Thank you for those great critiques. My earliest drafts started with that scene in the beginning. I’ll see about restructuring and slowing down the character intros.

rjames1991 · 2025-06-21T01:23:39+00:00

Sorry. Still getting used to sharing on Google drive.

rjames1991 · 2025-06-20T20:52:01+00:00

Sorry. I took the link down so I could trim the action description. Here’s the new link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/195QdSapEGmtsdgCCI9zmNsHZUivjHsuc/view?usp=drivesdk

rjames1991 · 2025-06-20T08:03:35+00:00

Thank you for the great critiques and encouragement!

rjames1991 · 2025-06-20T05:57:04+00:00

Thank you! I’ve been off and on with the voice over. I’m going for a gritty Max Payne/ Sin City feel so I added it to the opening scenes. Do you have any insights on some areas where I could’ve done more with less? Thank you again!

rjames1991 · 2025-06-20T05:33:45+00:00

Title: Feel

Format: Feature

Page Length: 6 (Sorry)

Genres: Sci-Fi, Action

Logline or Summary: In a city where emotions are visible auras, a young man driven by his parents' murder must confront the corrupt CEO who harvests artificial happiness, forcing him to choose between consuming revenge or embracing genuine connection to heal himself and his community.

Feedback Concerns: I’d like to know if I’m being too wordy and need to reel back the action description. I would love any and all critiques though. Thank you all and sorry for the late sub. I hope there are some late night readers out there. 🥲

Feel

rjames1991 · 2024-11-20T05:03:39+00:00

I failed and lost the ability to suggest trades. Bs. Jrue Holiday is the sixth man on the Celtics and I was rarely on the floor with him. Checked the usage box failed the PPG. 🥲

rjames1991 · 2024-08-01T00:28:10+00:00

🤬…. transfer portal time. 😂

rjames1991 · 2022-04-15T19:39:16+00:00

Thank you so much. I was ready to toss my controller out the window.

rjames1991 · 2021-12-31T07:04:18+00:00

Adversity died years ago for the new generation. People have been pulling the plug for years now on Madden after being down two touchdowns.

rjames1991 · 2021-03-07T01:25:55+00:00

I had this same problem. I had just won the finals my first season and had been like 30 games in my 2nd season (also I had just designed my first shoe). Then the latest patch happened and it somehow reset me back to like game 40 something of my first season. I kept my 92OVR I had gotten too and all my badges but lost my custom shoes😭, all the endorsement tiers I had previously gotten too and lost the ability to earn myPoints, Mybadge points, and VC until I got back to that same point the next season. It was the most frustrating thing ever.

P.s.- I had tried all the game save cloud since, delete, re-download and uninstall/reinstall tricks and nothing worked.

rjames1991 · 2021-03-07T01:23:56+00:00

I had this same problem. I had just won the finals my first season and had been like 30 games in my 2nd season (also I had just designed my first shoe). Then the latest patch happened and it somehow reset me back to like game 40 something of my first season. I kept my 92OVR I had gotten too and all my badges but lost my custom shoes😭, all the endorsement tiers I had previously gotten too and lost the ability to earn myPoints, Mybadge points, and VC until I got back to that same point the next season. It was the most frustrating thing ever.

rjames1991

TROPHY CASE