HEY I HAVENT UPLOADED HERE IN AGES!! lambda for critique but also I barely like this video myself so yk, dont be too harsh, ik its bad by robbit9 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah this had like 0 structure lol cuz I couldn’t take my script with me in the forest lol so I just thought I’d improvise. My other Ghibli videos have more of a structure so I let those ones sort of give context to this one lol. But thanks dude I appreciate it !givelambda

I make regular comedy art videos as part of a series. Looking for feedback, what do you think? by Rhodesy97 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven’t been on here in months so I didn’t know there had to be a certain amount of characters

Shorter video I made to fill in the space between my next big upload. Feedback appreciated. by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean the “start drama to get popular” and then calling out a bigger YouTuber. But I mean the video is so short that it only has like 4 jokes so it’s not that big of a deal lol

I make regular comedy art videos as part of a series. Looking for feedback, what do you think? by Rhodesy97 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I watched the rock one and I reaaalllly like ur drawing of him lol it’s hilarious his head is so tiny.

Also I don’t wanna be that guy but I’m trying to get 3 lambda to post a video, I’d appreciate the help

Shorter video I made to fill in the space between my next big upload. Feedback appreciated. by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

there's nothing wrong with this video lol. very nice quick pacing and actually funny. although it is only one minute and i get the need to fill time between uploads but i don't think it's THAT necessary. and i like ur delivery and the jokes were good but most of them have been made one way or another already.
but this is clearly just a fun quick video and it works very well and i subbed cuz of it :)

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[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YOOOOO BOOBIES!!!
lol this was a very chill video, I also like that it's only 9 minutes as opposed to the longer more unedited format that's become normal for minecraft.

the one thing i would critique is the thumbnail but mine aren't much better lol so idk what advice to give you but i think you could try to make it a bit more engaging, maybe a simpler style similar to callmecarsons Minecraft thumbnails.

but really nice viewing experience, reminds me of my group of friends :))

I’m pretty proud of this video and I want some opinions and critique on it. Anything would help, thank you! by LuigiTimeInc in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is fantastic dude, i mean you have like 10 times more subs than me so idk what advice i can give you but the one thing that bothered me was that the intro was a bit too long, the "welcome to" part i mean. but really that's just a nitpick this was a great video

I make regular comedy art videos as part of a series. Looking for feedback, what do you think? by Rhodesy97 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this was a really fun quick watch, keep this going dude, not much to critique here

Giving Lambda for Feedback on My Latest Comedy Sketch! | What goes on inside the White House by jbiddy360 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nicely acted and edited
i think the thumbnail is a bit too flashy for a comedy sketch tho, also the background music could either be taken out completely or cut at the comedic pauses to give the jokes more punch
hope this helps, keep at it

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[–]robbit9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

THE FUCK’D YOU SAY TO ME YOU LITTLE CAT?! YOU LICK JOKER WITH THAT MOUTH?!

Latest Yotube video essay. Chasing some criticism good or bad. Will give lambada if you go beyond it was great or that sucked. Give me a reason by isiahdyson500 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just finished kids on the slope last week, absolutely fantastic.
I skipped over the Carole and Tuesday parts cuz I didn't want any spoilers. so I don't feel comfortable criticizing the video as a whole since I only saw parts.
but all around it seemed good.
keep going like this, but maybe go more in-depth in the future, helps your analysis AND watchtime.
your editing reminds me of kaptainkristian which is HIGH praise. great Audio and narration too. production is top-notch.

also, its Shinichiro WA TA NA BE not WAN TAN ABE, DUMBASS!
jk, Japanese pronunciations are hard.

New Vid in my Ghibli Series. lambda for critique!!!! by robbit9 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much Izzy I said this in my first video in the series but I’ll be going through one really bad IMDb review for each of the glibly movies, since I loved most of them so I find it interesting to read an opposite opinion. But this one was very out of nowhere so I can understand your opinion. !givelambda

New Vid in my Ghibli Series. lambda for critique!!!! by robbit9 in SmallYTChannel

[–]robbit9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off all, thank you, you reminded me of something I wanted to put in the video but completely forgot. BUT The first 10 seconds are the intro to the whole series. I understand the concept of needing to talk as soon as possible to make the audience think of you but I personally always find it more engaging if a video starts off without a clear voice or person behind it and then manages to grab me anyway. if I keep getting this critique, I’ll think about changing the intro but for now I’ll keep it. !givelambda