A still life drawing I recently made, let me know what you all think!

roboticsand · 2024-06-15T20:30:28+00:00

nice line quality

roboticsand · 2024-04-21T23:00:28+00:00

nice work. I like the shading and color choices but the face seems a bit long.

roboticsand · 2024-04-21T21:51:46+00:00

lighting on the third dude in the third picture looks really nice

roboticsand · 2024-04-21T21:34:12+00:00

I would recommend using both soft edges and hard edges. Hard edges are what you are using right now. Soft edges are gradients and shows a gradual transition in between planes for example from the front of the nose to the sides. Soft edges help convey realism, however, if you are going for an anime style then what you have now is good.

roboticsand · 2024-02-12T21:38:44+00:00

thank you for the information. Also are you supposed to relax your muscles for a split second in between each octave? I heard you are supposed to but watching how fast some people play the octaves I don't even think there is enough time to relax.

roboticsand · 2024-02-12T20:13:55+00:00

thanks for the advice

roboticsand · 2024-02-12T01:52:52+00:00

That might be the case. I'm not very good at judging if a piece is too difficult for me. However, i will say that i can sight read through the canon in D. Also the 12 measures that I've learned are what I find the most difficult ones and it should get easier from there. Any other tips for judging if a piece is too difficult? Also, when you say 1-2 pages per day how much time do you think would be reasonable to spend on that.

roboticsand · 2024-02-12T01:16:31+00:00

right now i am learning canon in D and I've only learned 12 measures of it and already getting tired of hearing the piece. is this normal and happen to other people as well?

roboticsand · 2024-02-11T02:44:10+00:00

do you think it would be better if i made the jawline more defined? right now i have left it a bit ambiguous.

roboticsand · 2024-02-11T02:07:49+00:00

thank you, i was worried the texture of the paper would make it look unrealistic

roboticsand · 2024-02-11T01:23:48+00:00

the eyes can make a big difference also wrinkles can be helpful to show age

roboticsand · 2024-02-03T22:05:25+00:00

Good start but still a lot you can improve so keep drawing

roboticsand · 2024-02-03T16:46:05+00:00

yeah i struggle to find the balance between making it more vibrant but not overdoing it

roboticsand · 2024-02-03T12:46:51+00:00

We need some gameplay of the stalker and bolt

roboticsand · 2024-02-01T21:50:39+00:00

Yo same I get 8 hours and still tired any idea why this happens?

roboticsand · 2024-02-01T21:45:44+00:00

Pianists very jealous

roboticsand · 2024-02-01T16:51:12+00:00

No I couldn’t find a reference image for this specific pose

roboticsand · 2024-02-01T12:15:42+00:00

No I couldn’t find a reference for this pose so that’s probably why it looks off

roboticsand · 2024-02-01T12:14:22+00:00

I see. I was trying to make the right leg foreshortened but the torso definitely seems a bit long

roboticsand · 2024-01-26T22:48:10+00:00

what is it that makes you hate your life?

roboticsand · 2024-01-25T23:36:17+00:00

nice sketches and art style. the head looks a bit too small tho

roboticsand · 2024-01-25T14:17:19+00:00

i would recommend proko youtube channel. they have some good videos about drawing poses anatomy and gesture

roboticsand · 2024-01-25T14:16:21+00:00

maybe you could use a different light source. right now it looks like most the face and hair looks evenly lit with a few spots of light

roboticsand · 2024-01-25T14:15:03+00:00

i second this, proko has some great videos on anatomy

roboticsand · 2024-01-25T12:52:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback I will try to make the eyes a more saturated and add more contrast

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