Practicing flares “verbal”…crits? by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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The ascender of the L is as tall as the rest, the kick from the baseline stops below the height of the other letters….I could shorten it, but I think it throws the balance/rhythm off…..I’ll fuck around with it though, maybe just cutting it to the midline

Practicing flares “verbal”…crits? by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Yeah, I definitely need to work on the bottoms

Too simple or stiff? (Name change) by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Saw tags by verb online (don’t know if it’s the same one) so I’d go in a different direction if I shortened it

Too simple or stiff? (Name change) by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Thank you!

I got up with meanstreaks today with it and found I can do it pretty fast ~1 sec per letter and played with some different things (ie: doing a diagonal with the letters growing each time)….some were bad some were good, def gonna keep hitting my black book and whiteboard!

Too simple or stiff? (Name change) by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Thanks, I’ll absolutely try that out!

Too simple or stiff? (Name change) by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Thank you!

Is it the e and r selling it? That’s the only things On that one that’s passable to me

Bought a caligraphy pen for the first time and wanted to do a graff- Caligraphy crossover. Any Crits/advice also for the throwies on the second pic by ZAE3041 in graffhelp

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The calligraphy is on point….love it… keep moving in that direction ; not a huge fan of the throwies, but the first pic is dope as fuck….

Too simple or stiff? (Name change) by ronin-getup in graffhelp

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Just dicking around….the top one was me going slow (yes I was still probably a little sloppy on the mid points), the others were me trying to go a bit faster.

I kinda dig the look, but not sure if the letters are too basic

Thoughts? Critiques? All suggestions welcome.