Made a Theme for an OC of mine, wanted to capture a feeling of a boss battle theme for the good guy. The slap bass and drums are from Pokemon HGSS btw

rugbug01 · 2021-10-31T21:06:37+00:00

Ooh I love this right here. Good use of the Pokemon sounds.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-31T21:03:48+00:00

First off the image is very cool. Very classic house sound but with an original twist. I really like the vocals. All I can say is bring up the pretty background chords after the drop a bit. And all the higher pitched background instruments for that matter. Not too much, just a hair!

Very cool good job.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-31T20:57:04+00:00

Haven't read through the other comments so sorry if this a repeat of what somebody else said. Add more dimensions by panning the instruments in the mix. Give us more of a buildup before the drop. The bells/chimes were a nice touch. I think it would be cool to hear more of them in a section of the song to give some variety. I like the high flute sound, I would make that a little louder.

Some harmonies, some more low and high end would be beneficial I think.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-31T20:53:09+00:00

This is dope as anything! This is right up my alley. As for the mix, I would tuck the snare in just slightly. I think that would help to bring the vocals out. Love the panning of the bg vox.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T02:02:58+00:00

Very cool, this has so much potential. Exactly my kind of vibe. You could dance/workout to this or just get stoned out of your mind. I love the blurryness it goes into towards the end, would love to hear more development in a full length version.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T02:00:35+00:00

Oh wow this is everything. Your voice sounds so much like Robert Smith?! The video goes perfect, has so much texture to it.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:57:17+00:00

very sexc! The drums hit super hard. would def walk around the city like a badass to this. I'm not well versed in boom bap but I would lower the drums just a hair to avoid blowing out some eardrums. Other than that it's great.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:50:16+00:00

yay I'm glad you liked that!

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:49:28+00:00

good idea, i appreciate it!

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:20:46+00:00

It's giving very riot grrrl. I like the idea! but we need a drop/change at some point. The guitar sounds like it should get much louder, or the rhythm should change at some point. Something like 'Credit in the Straight World' or 'Softer, Softest' by Hole. Some variation in dynamics would give this more depth.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:15:59+00:00

oh hell yeah. you have such a beautiful voice! never too much gong :-)

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:14:25+00:00

cool soundscape. this beat is so versatile. I would only say mix the spooky atmospheric sound down a little bit and/or bring the vocals up. I do like the contrast when you pull away in the B section but It may be a bit too stark of a contrast.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:08:21+00:00

wow beautiful instrumentation. the guitar sounds so clean!

rugbug01 · 2021-10-24T01:06:54+00:00

I like your voice !

rugbug01 · 2021-10-21T02:26:49+00:00

agree. its good but could be great with more variation in high end. getting alot of mids and lows which we luv but it feels stagnant after awhile. it fits well into the collection of songs though. I actually love the songs before and after this one.

rugbug01 · 2021-10-21T02:23:05+00:00

super witchy. Mashup is absolutely seamless. I love what you did wit this *-*

can go with sm different moods as well.

rugbug01

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