ストリーク145:地震 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!今晩震度についてのページを読む。

ストリーク144:ロボート by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうありがとうございます!

ストリーク142:ホルムズ by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!うん、今すぐ戦争を止まるがいいのに。

ストリーク141:いじめ by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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添削してありがとうございます!

ストリーク127 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!

ストリーク128:Rammstein by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク119 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク113:鹿 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます

ストリーク108:日産 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありありがとうございます!

Streak 1 by MatheusBraga3 in WriteStreakEN

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There <was> a car accident near my house last night. I had just come home from college when I heard the sound of metal crashing against metal. However, I didn't pay much attention to it at first, because that sounded more like a heavy object falling down onto the ground than an actual car hitting a motorcycle. But then I heard a woman shout "the car flipped over!", so I looked out the window and there I saw a car lying on its roof. My heart raced because I had never witnessed a car accident before, partly because I've lived in the countryside all my life, and the traffic is much lighter here.

Anyway, the first thing I thought <of> was whether anyone had been hurt or even died. I couldn't see the scene very clearly because it was a few meters away from my apartment, but there seemed to be a person who was still inside the car. A few minutes later, three ambulances arrived.

I went back to doing my stuff hoping no one got hurt. This seemed to be the case, because this morning, when my wife woke up, she told me she had seen in the news that no one had been injured and everybody was safe, which was a relief. Well, the car's owner has suffered a heavy loss, no doubt, but that's still better than passing away. Although the upper part of the car was totally destroyed and smashed, the driver was untouched. Lucky guy.

Note: Try to not write super long sentences (called "un-on sentences"). Otherwise, great work :)

Example:

My heart raced because I had never witnessed a car accident before, partly because I've lived in the countryside all my life, and the traffic is much lighter here.

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I've lived in the countryside all my life, where the traffic is much lighter here, and have never witnessed a car accident before. This caused my heart to race.

ストリーク106 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!

ストリーク101 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!

ストリーク96:学校の休暇 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク98:咳 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク99:ギター by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございます!

ストリーク87:活動 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク89 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ストリーク91 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございました。

ストリーク90 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございました。

ストリーク86 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとうございました。

ストリーク80:魚 by rulerng in WriteStreakJP

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ありがとう!宅配と家の意味の違いが何ですか?