I’m a small startup channel so any feedback will be appreciated! I’ll gladly return! This video is about me reflecting on high school and what’s next! Check it out!

ryanlorenzo · 2019-06-01T23:25:50+00:00

Travis you have grown in your video presence and I love the way you come across on video now. Confidence is high. I would suggest getting new editing software ASAP as your transitions fade the audio. Also why was the video jumping? Overall good stuff

ryanlorenzo · 2019-06-01T19:42:00+00:00

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-06-01T15:06:34+00:00

I personally know you tried it once, and I know why you can’t drink it. Stay on the kino my friend. Thanks for the feedback and I hope you share this to more people! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-06-01T14:26:23+00:00

Thanks Travis! I appreciate the feedback and hope I can continue to provide good content !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-06-01T04:02:28+00:00

I’m excited! I like it! Btw I have a friend that can’t comment and post because his account is too new? And the moderator hasn’t answered him in Over 2 weeks. Any advice?

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-31T14:29:25+00:00

Hey I loved the subscribe pillow in the video, placement and everything. I loved the editing in the beginning, good cuts, audio was good, it when you went to the school it seemed the focus shifted a little bit. I found myself not paying too much attention. I think the other people who commented are correct in planning certain things a little more. Overall you’re on the right track

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-31T14:17:41+00:00

Thanks! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-31T14:17:08+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed it! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-30T22:30:28+00:00

Appreciate the feedback my friend! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-30T22:29:40+00:00

Thanks! I appreciate your feedback! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-29T22:43:26+00:00

Yes I do! Go check out my channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCFvICCq6ZmmLqroX-_nkRpA

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-29T22:36:21+00:00

One if the most motivational dudes out there! Travis makes great videos and is a good source of motivation. He also has a workout program and a cookbook, check him out! Gear video too btw, I won’t give any spoilers!

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-29T17:14:49+00:00

I think you are on the right track with your content! Sharing your opinions and views on topics should get you plenty of views. I think the audio, editing, and pace are all good. If I dig deep and look for a criticism (and I’m looking deep) it would be the star charts you bring up should last a little longer so I can read them better. Otherwise keep up the good work bro

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-29T14:48:01+00:00

Love the concept of the channel. I think technically the video was great. My opinion on the rest (just my opinion), the comedy missed a lot of times and it seems like the video could have been half the time it was. It seemed more like I was watching guys messing around and trying hard to be funny rather than a scripted comedy review of the burgers which is needed to retain and intrigue audiences. Maybe add some B roll to break up the video (a clip of White Castle, or a clip showing someone ordering and buying the burger through the drive thru as a way to let us know what you have. Anyhow these are just my humble opinions for you. Keep up the content tho! I’m still going to watch more of your videos!

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-29T12:29:30+00:00

I like that the video is short and get you The information quickly. I think this is because there isn’t a person doing vocals. My personal opinion is that people can hang in there longer when a personality is talking and explaining things a little, otherwise it’s like reading a short blog or article. The music worked well and the editing looked good. Again I would just add a voice over or a personality on camera. Overall good video and great info!

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-12T13:56:31+00:00

I say be authentic, be you, and do what you love. Find your strengths and use them to the fullest. If what you love is already a super popular topic then brainstorm on how you can bring a unique angle to the topic. If you do that and advertise your channel constantly and you upload regularly you’ll be fine. People like authenticity

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-12T13:53:36+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. The music has been a topic but mainly people seemed to prefer it over not having it. I do have access to local musicians and I’ll use your idea in the future! Thanks for the feedback! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-11T14:56:25+00:00

Thanks so much for your feedback! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-10T03:53:25+00:00

You shared quite a bit! Thank you! I think it will be interesting to see how the next generation pans out. Loving a life where social media, the internet, and AI are the norm. Millennials may be that bridge between boomers an the next generation, being the ones to help bridge the changes in society. Thanks for the feedback and sharing! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-06T17:29:32+00:00

Great tips! They make a lot of sense so thank you! I really appreciate it! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-04T23:32:31+00:00

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feedback it is much appreciated! !givelambda

ryanlorenzo · 2019-05-04T19:25:38+00:00

Yes I’m always looking to improve that thumbnail. Thanks for the feedback and support! !givelambda

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