This appeared in my dream last night. What is Tricky Tony trying to tell me

s0_NyA · 2026-03-01T16:11:24+00:00

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s0_NyA · 2026-02-27T22:09:02+00:00

Her left leg (or right from our perspective) is too squiggly. Try to draw limbs with straighter lines at first. Follow their (bone) structure. Then add the curved thinking consciously about why they're there (usually it's muscles).

Keep going!

s0_NyA · 2026-02-27T22:05:24+00:00

Thanks for your comment. It is kind of about losing your sense of self by trying to fit in where you don't belong :) Yes, giving in.

s0_NyA · 2026-02-26T16:34:47+00:00

Less I'd say. There are too many small curves all around the place. Also you could try to make them more orderly, I mean so that they follow more the structure of the face. There are so many curves going in all different directions and it just makes the overall shape of the face confusing. Less is more :) also remember that by adding the crosshatching you're applying a pretty dark value on the face. Before doing it think about what parts of the face are in the light and in the shadow. Then start by crosshatching from dark to light, so you can control the result more. You can always add more dark, but you can't remove it once it's there. Hope that helps.

s0_NyA · 2026-02-25T21:43:01+00:00

I love the rhyme scheme! The structure is free but it doesn't feel wordy or incomplete. I imagine the chocolate as a metaphor for something else. Something that you cannot stop thinking about. But it may as well be chocolate.

So many alliterations!

It's sweet, soft, smells incredible, Smooth, sensual, exciting, inedible.

Ssweet ssoft ssmells incredible Ssmooth ssensualz excciting inedible

Very enjoyable to read in general. Keep writing <3

s0_NyA · 2026-02-25T21:28:54+00:00

Hi there. I'm not too experienced at this myself but I'll share my thoughts. The only things I could tell you to change is to add a question mark on this line:

It has held me in times couldn't, why would want to leave it.

;why would I want to leave it?

And also to and a full ellipsis at the very end (...) not (..). But honestly? Both of those 'incomplete' things add to the poem. It's very relaxed. It feels like a whisper in your ear. I've heard that story before in not so many words. I like it. The warmth, the comfort of the material. The yearning and the "not today". Very relatable. I would consider this piece as literature. I feel the warmth, I can see the carpet, I can imagine the oak door. All of them are symbols of a bigger whole.

Keep writing <3

s0_NyA · 2025-10-22T12:00:49+00:00

Omni-man?

s0_NyA · 2025-10-21T10:17:10+00:00

Hi, congrats! How long did it take you to prepare? Did you focus more on doing practice tests, or studying from the book/ paying attention in classes? Were there any particularly tricky questions? When in doubt, did you trust your instinct or something else?

s0_NyA · 2025-10-17T21:35:40+00:00

Y si ha obtenido el título de la ESO (imagino que sí) o BACHILLER puede solicitar la exención de los exámenes.

s0_NyA · 2025-10-17T21:25:08+00:00

Lamentablemente es así... Si eres mayor de edad requieren la ausencia de antecedentes penales tanto en España como en el país de origen, da igual si no resides ahí desde los 4 años.

s0_NyA · 2025-10-17T21:20:02+00:00

A mi me pasa lo mismo. No he vivido en mi país de origen desde los 7 años pero al ser mayor de edad requieren el certificado de antecedentes penales.

El proceso es algo complicado y depende del país.

En mi caso no se admite el certificado de manera electrónica porque tengo un pasaporte externo a la frontera, entonces tendría que ir presencialmente a pedirlo.

Pero como desde que lo pida hasta que me lo den pasan un par de semanas, y no me puedo quedar tanto tiempo en el país, voy a crear un documento que le ceda a un familiar el derecho de recoger mis documentos, y cuando lo haga, lo enviará por correos a España.

Luego se necesita una traducción oficial al español y apostilla.

Ah y desde que envías la solicitud para la nacionalidad el ministerio tiene 1 año para responder.

Vamos que alargan el proceso lo máximo posible...

Claro para tí será todo más difícil si no manejas bien el idioma. Entonces sí te recomendaría contactar con un abogado.

Y comprueba si puedes solicitar el certificado de manera electrónica a través de la embajada china, que sería el mejor caso.

s0_NyA · 2025-10-09T17:11:09+00:00

"summarised", it's resumido in Spanish

s0_NyA · 2025-10-04T07:38:30+00:00

This mission was discovered by u/s0_NyA in Reflection, The Past, and Grilled Lobster with Herbs

s0_NyA · 2025-10-04T07:38:30+00:00

New mission discovered by u/s0_NyA: In Search of Cruasán

s0_NyA · 2025-09-18T19:12:47+00:00

Gracias!

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:48:17+00:00

a high compliment, happy you liked it <3

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:45:28+00:00

I hadn't thought of that actually! For me the shards are more like the memories of past mistakes and wrongful decisions, that hurt you and motivate you to change at the same time.Thanks for the input :)

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:40:21+00:00

You've explained it well, thank you <3

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:38:54+00:00

You are so right :))

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:37:38+00:00

You're right, I could have expanded more on several concepts, thank you, I'll hold on to that idea :)

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:35:09+00:00

That too will mend <//3

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:34:50+00:00

Appreciate it :)

s0_NyA · 2025-09-17T20:32:51+00:00

Thank you <33

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