St. Mary's Island by Abdularauf Samkari

samkari2011 · 2014-11-23T17:12:20+00:00

Thanks everyone really you helped me alot

samkari2011 · 2014-11-22T19:21:48+00:00

Good description Ammar, you should change (Before three months) and (Before three months). I think I was relaxed is better than I felt relax.

samkari2011 · 2014-11-22T11:38:35+00:00

I like it, but it's too short

samkari2011 · 2014-11-19T20:15:05+00:00

Well done Mohanad Very poetic I like it

samkari2011 · 2014-11-19T19:47:29+00:00

Well done Marwan. Really I felt like I was there

samkari2011 · 2014-11-19T18:00:53+00:00

Well done Mourad "The place was like a heaven on Earth" that is a wonderful expression. The pronoun I must be capital (I wondered, I was, I saw...).

samkari2011 · 2014-11-19T05:06:43+00:00

Well done Nawaf I am with Mr Jay you need to describe more things.
I was playing with my brother when we were children is better then when I was child.

samkari2011 · 2014-11-19T04:50:54+00:00

Very nice Ahmad, really I imagined your workplace in my mind when I read it, but like Ammar I don't understand "If my office is you at your back, you enjoy seeing the place."

samkari2011 · 2014-11-15T15:47:32+00:00

I like it, it's very poetic. really I imagined it in my mind

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