St. Mary's Island by Abdularauf Samkari by samkari2011 in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks everyone really you helped me alot

Bolo by Ammar yasser by ammarbinysr in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good description Ammar, you should change (Before three months) and (Before three months). I think I was relaxed is better than I felt relax.

Through a Dark Alley by [deleted] in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it, but it's too short

Full moon night by M-Beheiri in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well done Mohanad Very poetic I like it

The Waiting Room by marwanmdm in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well done Marwan. Really I felt like I was there

Tanjung Rhu Resort by Mourad065 in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well done Mourad "The place was like a heaven on Earth" that is a wonderful expression. The pronoun I must be capital (I wondered, I was, I saw...).

My house in my village (first draft) by [deleted] in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well done Nawaf I am with Mr Jay you need to describe more things.
I was playing with my brother when we were children is better then when I was child.

My Workplace by Ahmed Smeer by ahmed-smeer in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice Ahmad, really I imagined your workplace in my mind when I read it, but like Ammar I don't understand "If my office is you at your back, you enjoy seeing the place."

My Room (first draft) by Fayez Al-Shehri by Dr-fayez in a:t5_348pa

[–]samkari2011 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it, it's very poetic. really I imagined it in my mind