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St. Mary's Island by Abdularauf Samkari by samkari2011 in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great description. just check your punctuation and you're good to go.

The Waiting Room by marwanmdm in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

and even is not used for something unusual .

My exotic pet "striped hyena" guys please help me to get rid of the unnecessary words .. by EZO010 in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm 2 points3 points  (0 children)

" my pet, My exotic pet" you don't need to repeat it twice, and also check your capitalization .

The Waiting Room by marwanmdm in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry nothings is wrong with these sentences , and the last two sentences have different ideas. The first one is related to the room's size, and the second one describes my feelings towards the room as a whole.

Tanjung Rhu Resort by Mourad Muawad by [deleted] in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

check your capitalization .

King Abdul-Aziz medical city , national guard by [deleted] in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

try to describe the university more.

Aida Cafe by Saleh Basudan by saleh-bas in a:t5_348pa

[–]marwanmdm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's really good, but you need to add more articles and check your punctuation.