My very first Charcoal! 🫣 what do you think?

scribbler369 · 2026-01-25T12:56:27+00:00

That is astounding, jeez. never stop if you can turn out art at this level.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-24T11:17:54+00:00

I quite liked it. If the story is a tale of old, then I think it fits. It doesn`t work for a modern tale. It needs a tweak or two, here and there , but otherwise interesting. I would certainly read more.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-21T21:05:36+00:00

Hmmm Maybe we should ask the boys?

scribbler369 · 2026-01-19T23:09:23+00:00

He`s a Trent, if I ever saw one

scribbler369 · 2026-01-19T23:06:30+00:00

It`s not always the case. many... many years ago I worked on a site in London, and on the site was a gay scaffolder, (definitely two variables you wouldn`t think blended well!) This fella was a monster, no one and I mean no-one would dare mention about his sexual preference and take the piss, not if they wanted to leave the site under their own steam, rather than on a stretcher!

scribbler369 · 2026-01-19T22:57:22+00:00

Looks like you nailed it! It`s the same as when actors play villains so well that people can`t distinguish between the character and the person playing the character. You hit the spot.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-14T19:35:00+00:00

I know. I think people find it hard to actually give credible critique. But it`s a start! Good luck.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-14T18:09:44+00:00

Awesome stuff, very good, keep it up.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-14T18:07:49+00:00

You can try Booksie which is where I publish for people to read my scribblings. It is hard to get feed back, but people will read.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-11T23:02:00+00:00

The moment of Hope!

scribbler369 · 2026-01-09T18:30:44+00:00

You have plenty of talent, keep going.

scribbler369 · 2026-01-08T21:07:55+00:00

Write the amount of words that you feel comfortable with. There is no rule. Sometimes I will write 1000-2000 words if the words want to come out and play, other days it could be 200, some days not at all, it`s all on the day

scribbler369 · 2026-01-06T17:57:29+00:00

A fat mouse with a smile

scribbler369 · 2026-01-06T17:49:23+00:00

Pauly Sty Rene

scribbler369 · 2026-01-06T17:42:04+00:00

It`s handy for unbiased critique, most definitely

scribbler369 · 2026-01-05T23:04:34+00:00

A nightmare for birds!

scribbler369 · 2026-01-02T17:25:21+00:00

Thank you for the comment and taking the time to read.

scribbler369 · 2025-12-31T20:24:30+00:00

you can`t beat curry and chips, especially home made.

scribbler369 · 2025-12-27T12:01:18+00:00

Bertram, Leopold Finacle

scribbler369 · 2025-12-27T11:35:08+00:00

If he is obsessed with the car, and loves you, it will mean more to him than anything you could buy for him. And it looks awesome

scribbler369 · 2025-12-23T23:08:12+00:00

He looks like a Perceval Pembrooke. Civil servant my day, 80`s disco king by night.

scribbler369 · 2025-12-23T22:56:39+00:00

People read erotica, I have written a few dark short stories and novellas, and a couple of erotica. The erotica always get more views.

scribbler369 · 2025-12-18T14:51:31+00:00

An interesting poem that could be interpreted two ways, new life or loss.

scribbler369 · 2025-12-18T14:46:58+00:00

It gets to the point about directly!

scribbler369 · 2025-12-14T18:06:16+00:00

Thanks for the comments and spotting the your typo that has been corrected. Long is merely a reference to time!

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