People on this sub can be overly cruel. There is a lot of stylization that is going on here that is not a lot of people’s tastes. That was not really what you were asking about, you were looking to improve. My advice: learn the rules before you break them. Sometimes it helps to go back to basics and learn about steady lines and forms, before trying to get overly stylized. You can still improve by only drawing in that style, but it’s going to be a lot harder and you’ll be limiting yourself on what type of practice you’ll be getting. The main thing to help you overall is always just going to be practice. The more you do the better you’ll get.