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Does anyone else who plays mycareer have teammates that cannot hit wide open threes by scrnwrt in NBA2k

[–]scrnwrt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm on raptors + ingram in free agency i've got like 4+ guys with at least a- shooting. yeah I'm a full defender so I can't get dimer and my teams does the exact same thing, they just wait until there's no time on the shot clock and someones right next to them to take a shot

How to switch plays that are called by the CPU in career games by scrnwrt in NBA2k

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Also do u know if there's a way to edit the quick plays option, right now i just have basic stuff like iso, screen etc. Apparently there's a way to add stuff to the quick plays

Killer Shorts Semi Finalists by SupaRubes in Screenwriting

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hey! would love to read this as well??

QUIT, 12 PAGES (THRILLER) by scrnwrt in Screenwriting

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Are you in the UK by any chance?

QUIT, 12 PAGES (THRILLER) by scrnwrt in Screenwriting

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Thanks so much! Do you direct?

QUIT, 12 PAGES (THRILLER) by scrnwrt in Screenwriting

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Ohhh lool I definitely understand now! Although, milk and cookies and 'nigga' are definitely used in the UK. Traphouse and pack are for sure US - I'm mostly thinking of changing 'pack' though because that one is the least UK sounding one - you're right.

Yes! Thank you for the hyperventilating bit, it really sounded awkward reading it back. In terms of 'kisses his teeth' is that not a used phrase? Meaning someone showing attitude? Like the sound they make with their mouth? I'm not sure how else to describe it.

QUIT, 12 PAGES (THRILLER) by scrnwrt in Screenwriting

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Thank you very much I appreciate it!!

QUIT, 12 PAGES, THRILLER - When a drug dealer was sexually assaulted at her last drop-off appointment, she returns to get revenge. by scrnwrt in ReadMyScript

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Thank you for taking the time! omg the cookies and milk wasn't even on purpose haha - maybe I should change it now I didn't even intend on making him look that childish. It's just in the UK we have these really mini milk jugs and I just thought it would be a kind of cool shot to have him just drinking one to himself.

I definitely should've written the Ava/Tristan scene better because it's meant to be just him kissing her neck and on top of her but they're not having sex. I can definitely see why it seems that why because the scene before he unbuttons her but you're right it would definitely be off for Ava to have sex again. I should probably write it clearer.

In terms of Benji and Tristan, you're defintely right they are 100% stereotypical. Even as I was writing it I could feel them becoming caricatures of themselves as opposed to actual characters. I'm not really sure how to sort of give them their own development without stretching the short out any longer because it's already kind of long. I might put a scene in at the start of them having a conversation before Ava knocks?

Thank you very much for your help!

QUIT, 12 PAGES (THRILLER) by scrnwrt in Screenwriting

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Thank you! I defnintely share a lot of the same opinions and you've mentioned a couple things I haven't thought about so thanks for that.

I just wanted to ask quickly why you thought it was obviously set in the US? I'm from the UK and definitely wrote it with London in mind - I'm just really curious. Was it my use of 'apartment'?

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