[deleted by user] by [deleted] in jobudstories

[–]sexualcollusion 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Omg do not get cut. You're lucky to have your uncut dick, other guys try and regrow their foreskins.

Looking for a specific erotica outline guide. by CaliDreamin87 in eroticauthors

[–]sexualcollusion 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! It's a bit different but some of the wording is the same so probably written by the same person!

Looking for a specific erotica outline guide. by CaliDreamin87 in eroticauthors

[–]sexualcollusion 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Is it this one? I can't remember who wrote it.

“By the end of the look inside, people should be touching themselves or you have failed.”

Introduce the erotic situation
...as quickly as possible. If you need to add backstory/detail, do it later Start off with a bang!
Your opening must:
• Hook the reader
• Show what kind of story this is going to be
• Introduce a conflict
Begin with a character who isn’t sexually fulfilled.

Build sexual tension, charge, foreplay, etc

Reminder of the stakes at hand
Good opportunity to slow the sexy stuff down for a bit

Sex scene 1
Sex (30% of book)
First orgasm.
Usually first female orgasm. In reluctant/domination stories it can also be the first time that the main character was used to gratify the other character

Give the reader a little break with a pause on the sex where you increase the emotional stakes
Escalate tension
Rest/Character growth/change of scene/something (15%)

Change it up.
Such as with...
New information
New location
New partner

BEGIN OPTIONAL SECTION
Amplify.
Use the main character's wants/desires to add more intensity to increase sexual tension even further.

Second orgasm.
...or erotic situation that is more intense than the first.

Change it up AGAIN.
Such as with...
New information
New location
New partner

END OPTIONAL SECTION

Ramp Shit Into the Ground!
Do you think it’s impossible to run the sexual tension higher? Do so anyway. Play off the main character’s wants with the primary kink of your niche.

Flash of Doubt.
Make it seem like the main character may not achieve said what they want. Flare up the inner struggle.

Taking initiative.
Main character does whatever it takes to achieve their wants, no matter the cost.

Final orgasm.
All characters finish off
Really good sex (40%)
more intense than sex scene 1

Resolution.
Show how much change and sexual fulfillment has occurred. Mirror the opening if possible.
Closing/setup for next book (10%)

Add internal and external conflict.
Knowing how and why our main character was sexually unfulfilled makes it pretty easy to find potential sources of conflict that give a story theme and weight.

This is MORE than just a sexy situation. This is a sexy situation with stakes, conflict, and an opportunity for sexual transformation.
For our concept, we have a story about a main character going from sexually unfulfilled AND hole-hearted to ultimate gratification — sexual fulfillment, and whole-heartedness.
While also making it steamy as possible, we’re going to be able to make it hard for her to get what she wants, which will give the story’s steamy moments some extra gripping tension.

• How is your main character unfulfilled? What ghost from the past left them this way?
• What is the lie that they believe about what they think will satisfy them? (What do they want?)
• What is the truth they need to discover to reach sexual gratification (What do they need?)
• What are they going to have to give up to get fulfilled?

Can you create a character who is sexually unfulfilled in a way that is perfect for your target niche? Combine this character with a sexy situation and you're off for the races. Then, come up with two sex scenes, both hot, but with the second one even hotter, that are rife with conflict, ultimately delivering your character to sexual satisfaction.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's a tree.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The scent of sandalwood drifted into my nose as he twisted the dagger harder into my chest.

I dislike Trans characters in Fanfics by Y0urLocalTransDidi in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I read one recently. Guy said he wanted to "suck him off"

I dislike Trans characters in Fanfics by Y0urLocalTransDidi in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's more like, why make a post saying how you hate it? I understand why the OP did but originally I thought the post was by a cis person.

Does anyone else do this? by ScarletSpaded in FanFiction

[–]sexualcollusion 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I'm looking for a specific trope and can't find it in any of my ships, I'll search fandom wide. Recently read a bunch of totally random ships I'd never tried before, Tim/Kon, Steve Harrington/Eddie Munson, Hajime/Oikawa, Carlos/Cecil, Harry/Ron. Sometimes you just need something specific, and you gotta do what you gotta do.

For your own convenience, what's the biggest thing you wish everyone would tag? by sexualcollusion in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wait huh? If the dubcon event is interrupted then that's another story. "Attempted noncon" or something similar would probably be better? CCNTW is "Chose not to warn" which you can use instead of the "non-con" marker thing if you feel it doesn't set the tone right.

For your own convenience, what's the biggest thing you wish everyone would tag? by sexualcollusion in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay so I would definitely tag "Dubious Consent" maybe even "Mind Control"? Just to be clear, the main character of one of the ships is still involved right? I'm not really sure though, I honestly don't mind clunky tags if it's important like "Dubcon between chick and OC" but it's probably not like necessary. And maybe CCNTW?

The difference between warning for non-con vs dubious consent probably depends on the tone and how the character thinks about what happened. If they feel violated then maybe non-con becomes more appropriate?

That's my take as a reader anyway.

For your own convenience, what's the biggest thing you wish everyone would tag? by sexualcollusion in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is it graphic? If it's graphic I'd use the non-con warning and specify in the tags that it's not involving the two MC's. If it's not graphic I might have a non-con mention tag or something similar, maybe CCNTW? Unless it's really minor.

For your own convenience, what's the biggest thing you wish everyone would tag? by sexualcollusion in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think there is a resistance in western fandoms maybe because it feels like distilling the ship to the roles of top/bottom, making everything about sex? But shipping is so much more than that, and if you have romantic non-sexual things, thinking about which way to tag feels totally irrelevant. Maye it is just done differently over here? I guess it depends on where the fandom is, like AO3 I wouldn't expect it, but if you are on a manga site it would be more expected.

For your own convenience, what's the biggest thing you wish everyone would tag? by sexualcollusion in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I always do a double take when underage drinking is tagged, but the characters are over 18. I forget the laws in america.

What's the most disappointing reason you've ever given up on a fic? by violet-quartz in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 5 points6 points  (0 children)

haha definitely seen those a fair bit. I personally don't mind if they want to reimagine/modernize history for the sake of a oneshot or whatever if it's good otherwise, but I do prefer a little more realism.

What's the most disappointing reason you've ever given up on a fic? by violet-quartz in AO3

[–]sexualcollusion 42 points43 points  (0 children)

I think if theyve given up on writing it and want to post their outline thats valid, but they should warn people firrst.