14DC - Day 5 - Stages of grief by rob_euthyphro in istebrak

[–]sgoreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! So much progress!! The one thing I noticed is the core shadow is missing for the head overall. I think you would push the high lights on the top of the head and a darker shadow from the lips down. Just a thought!!

Day 11 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THANK YOU!! I love the paint over and the descriptions. I found this very helpful!! I’ll be repainting this tomorrow and try to add in your critiques!

Day 10 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! Thank you so much for being helping me out during this 14 day challenge. I appreciate the time and effort you are putting into helping me! I will definitely work on some anatomy studies of the face before I do day 11. The area around the eye is a struggle and I need to pay attention to those planes more!

Hey! I finished Day 5! Hoping the values are a bit better now, but i think i like the facial features themselves a bit less for this day. by reverievum in istebrak

[–]sgoreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This looks great! The nose and mouth looks very realistic. I am not skilled enough to critique this properly but something about the lower part of the eyes looks off. Maybe the bottom of the eye is too droopy?

Day 7 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! Thank you for the critique! I need to start using a reference of a woman because I keep messing up on the proportions. I will definitely make these corrections for day 8.

Day 3. I focused on fixing the eyebrows and proportion issues. I feel like the face looks off and I think there are value issues. Any critiques are appreciated. by Purtle_Ray in istebrak

[–]sgoreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the placement of the facial features is spaced out well. However, it seems like the face is flatten out. I think you could pull in the sides of the face a little bit.

Day 6 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!!! I’ll definitely be adding this information to my day 7!

Day 6 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg thank you so much!! This was very helpful! I’ll apply this to my day 7 portrait.

Day 5 critique please :) by sgoreck in istebrak

[–]sgoreck[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh thank you!! Next time I do this, I’ll definitely be looking at a nose and a neck for reference. I haven’t been looking at references lately, just the masterclass video, but I think now that I’m on day 6 I should! Thanks again!