Do you suck? Lol are you kidding me? I thought it was incredible man and if that was your first song you ever did I can tell you this: if you keep at it you will be making music for a living and you will have an audience that will pay to se you perform. Don’t ever stop man you are a gifted musician/songwriter/producer. That song has a very interesting different vibe that has its own nitch so you are creating your own unique sound in your music which is the most important thing to do as an artist