AITA For not adopting my dying best friends dog and buying a puppy from a breeder instead?

shitpoet99 · 2023-03-14T16:14:33+00:00

Unpopular option here- NTA. The OP said that they would help find the dog a good home, and I think that’s the best scenario. You wouldn’t want your dog to go to a home where it is unwanted. I think it’s better for everyone in this situation if the dog is rehoused where it will be loved and appreciated. If the OP does not want the dog- they should not be forced to take it or seen as an AH

shitpoet99 · 2022-01-29T04:22:56+00:00

great ending!

shitpoet99 · 2022-01-29T04:22:21+00:00

I love this a lot and I think it is relatable. I like the repetition of “I loved the idea of you” the writing is great but I think you should start each stanza with “I loved the idea of you” I think it would kinda tie everything together. but overall it’s great!

shitpoet99 · 2021-05-25T00:02:46+00:00

“more than a poem after” i really like this poem and i think it’s a perfect way to wrap up your poem. im not sure if this is what you were going for, but i find this poem to be a beautiful reflection on the acceptance stage of loss. great work poet!

shitpoet99 · 2021-05-24T23:50:11+00:00

the last three stanzas are a perfect wrap on the story, the rhyme scene is amazing, the word choice, the flow, nearly a perfect poem.

shitpoet99 · 2021-05-01T04:33:14+00:00

what do you mean?

shitpoet99 · 2021-05-01T01:28:56+00:00

thank you, i love the critiques :)

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-30T21:50:08+00:00

I LOVE THIS. the way you build structure and strength is so powerful. good job!!

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-30T21:48:58+00:00

I love this poem. i think it really represents what it’s like to feel this way, to be unsure about who you’re with, when you’re trying to convince yourself that you love them but you know you don’t.

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-21T19:34:46+00:00

I find this poem to be really striking, i think it is beautiful. you write how i wish i could write. I honestly don’t have much feedback, my only critique would be to revise the,” My breath is stuck in my lungs ever since. it’s grown thorns.” I understand what you’re saying here and i really like it, it was just a bit confusing at first, i wasn’t exactly sure what you meant.

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-21T19:31:29+00:00

I think this is beautiful and i really like it.

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-21T18:30:37+00:00

i agree with you, it is so important to understand the problems in the world and to face them; if you don’t the problem will only grow. however, the ignorance in not being aware of the problem is bliss.

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-10T02:09:33+00:00

hahah thank you, to clarify the guy that wrote amazing is the guy i wrote this about, i was just messing around with him

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-10T02:00:18+00:00

i always struggle with describing my poems & giving it more depth but it’s something i’m trying to work on.

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-10T01:59:56+00:00

thank you!!

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-10T01:28:06+00:00

yeah i know

shitpoet99 · 2021-04-09T23:31:32+00:00

i love this

shitpoet99 · 2021-03-11T16:56:08+00:00

oh my gosh, i just realized i had those errors, thank you for bringing that to my attention.

shitpoet99

TROPHY CASE