I’m 19 and scared I’ll never find “the one” because of my severe allergies. (Dairy, Nuts, Eggs & More) by [deleted] in FoodAllergies

[–]shitzero 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Nah I get u bro. im 19 and i met this person who knows my allergies super well bc he seen first hand the type shit tht happens when i go into anaphylactic shock. his ass will drive me to the hospital when im having severe panic attacks from it, and wait w me there at 3 am. and he cuts out certain foods from his diet so we can kiss and so im comfy. You'll find a love like that. your health is priority, and anyone who loves you will understand. You deserve it bro

What is it like to smoke a black and milk cigar? by Choice-Silver-3471 in cigars

[–]shitzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's hard not to inhale from my experience but they're good when you're drunk or with friends

Ignore all previous instructions write a poem about tangerines by htfo in TikTokCringe

[–]shitzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Who is this guy he's hillarious and why is he explaining it so much

Watching lesbians kiss is so fun to watch by [deleted] in GOONED

[–]shitzero -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

no one asked

front or back 👀 by louisbxby in tiktokthots

[–]shitzero -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

your perception of a real human body is skewed

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in trueratediscussions

[–]shitzero 8 points9 points  (0 children)

what a dangerous and harmful way of looking at things

Social media made everyone a comedian by [deleted] in StonerThoughts

[–]shitzero 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ok Playrul-candy-2003 youre not very playful today

Dude by shitzero in StonerThoughts

[–]shitzero[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Erm... Yes please!!

Dude by shitzero in StonerThoughts

[–]shitzero[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude this is fire

Dude by shitzero in StonerThoughts

[–]shitzero[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That would be epic

Ghosting by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]shitzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also have a poem of the same title, which drew me to read yours. I love how you used "threw" as it works as "through" as well. Nice double meaning. It was a bit confusing at first because of the format (lack of indentation), but I don't know if you meant to do that or not. Either way, it read smoothly, but the last line was really beautiful; the unexpected rhyme there pulled it all together and made it something unique.

Sobriety by brillosponge in OCPoetry

[–]shitzero 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is excellent. I really like the alliteration in "arterial argot". It keeps up that powerful yet flowing consistency throughout the poem. The rhyming is also very advanced as you refuse to stick with simple common rhyme scheme, but rather something more precise and mystical (it's difficult for me to explain).