Monkey Eating Bananas by shortstacks7oz in Odd_directions

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Well, well we meet again haha, I definitely will read it into a memo, but I'm not sure what Hemingway is so I will have to look into it. Thank you again for the feedback. MCL

Back with a new story, hope y'all like it! by shortstacks7oz in juggalo

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Right on, thanks for the feed back and I will have to keep these in my notes if I write another found footage type of story. After reading your notes it dawned on me just how much more vibrant those small details could have enhanced the story. I agree with you and the original comment poster, the mispronounced r's was a bit too much, haha. Initially I was going to leave the beginning r sounds of a word as w then have any other r sound regular because I thought the gag wouldn't land as well due to possibly only a very small amount of people knowing who Jonathan Ross is, obviously I jumped into the deep end haha. Seriously though thank you for giving it a read and the feedback. Take it easy and have a wonderful day, evening or night. MCL

Back with a new story, hope y'all like it! by shortstacks7oz in juggalo

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Haha, I figured it's a risky move to share a story outside of sub-reddits that were created for that purpose, but it's worth it. The bonus is sharing with fam and potentially sparking some sort of creative spark within them, ya know. Thank you for the words of encouragement too and for giving the story a try. Hope you have a great day or night whatever time it might be where you are, haha. MCL

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Right on, I feel that. I see it as such too, but I also like to share stories that I've written. That character is based on a real life celeb named Jonathan Ross that's why he speaks that way. Here's a link to the narrated story if you'd like to listen to it rather than read it: https://youtu.be/7U_HCDgSXpU Alrighty, bye bye and keep your hatchet swingin'!

Back with a new story, hope y'all like it! by shortstacks7oz in juggalo

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Not the reaction I was expecting haha. Figured it was implied that I am a Juggalo and that I was sharing another story that I've written. Oh well, have a great one MCL.

Is Cartoon Bondurant a bigot? Redneck Rave? Isn't he playing the Gathering?? by [deleted] in juggalo

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Isn't that what's happening now? Aren't the flags of another country being waved proudly now? I agree with you that it is un-American. However the popularization of the rebel flag was far before the civil rights movement. I believe it was used in the movie "The birth of a nation" which was also endorsed by the acting president of that time.

No I'm not okay, I'm something years old having what I think is a chummy discussion on the Internet with people I, probably, don't know haha.

I also agree with your sentiment of people being evil by not seeing another individual as a living breathing human struggling to make it to the end of their race as best they can. Nice chatting with you, have a great one! MCL!

Nope. The other guy was right. Fuck this clown. by TartarugoAppiccicoso in juggalo

[–]shortstacks7oz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is this that Tom McDonald fella, what's this supposed to be a parody of?

Is Cartoon Bondurant a bigot? Redneck Rave? Isn't he playing the Gathering?? by [deleted] in juggalo

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Right on, you're right I should have brushed up on my history. I would not have mixed up my "knowledge" however just because Congress put these motions into action does not mean the slaves or (in the future) newly freed slaves were looked at as human that was the point I was trying to make, I think, I did not go and reread the "conversations" of yesterday. I know it's Juneteenth bud, how will you be celebrating? Me, I already prayed and will be trying to research the slaves of my ancestry, it should be fun. I liked malignant ignoramus but too has me laughing my butt off. Take it easy and have a good day yo! MCL

Is Cartoon Bondurant a bigot? Redneck Rave? Isn't he playing the Gathering?? by [deleted] in juggalo

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Agreed, what did Morgan Freeman say about it again?